hope its rexes :D
great work BTW. KIU
Well, the update probably won't be here till the end of the week. School's starting :(
^You think thats bad? I have to hand in a project tomorrow:eek:. First day back and we have to hand in 30% of our mark.
:lol: HAHA!!! Sucks for you!!!!
i swear. id hate to be you hall. :D
and JK: KIU means Keep It Up
Hey guys :) I'm back from my little "vacation." I wasn't in a Star Wars writing mood, but the update should be soon.
^Way to get yourself banned JK. I can't wait for the next chapter :).
P.S. I got 92% on that project :D.
Welcome back, JK. its a good thing i wasnt told to go with you :D
Added a teeny bit (about 2/3 Microsoft Word page). I would of written more, but I'm sick as a dog today :( :barf:
Good update, but you called HK 'AK'. Keep it up! :thumbs1:
See what I mean? :barf: I'm sick!! :(
good work. i still cant come up with an ending for my first chap
what have you come down with?
I don't know!! I have a pretty high fever, yet I feel alright. Though for the past week, I've had an absolutely terrible headache about 24/7 :(
go to a physician, man. it could become more serious
Well, I just took some Excedrin, and that's made it go away, but if it comes back, I'll probably go to a doctor.
right. its still better to se a doc now itself but have it your way.
Great work once again :D
Well, after yet another "vacation" I'm back. My brother..."accidentally" deleted all of my documents, so I lost my story yet again. But I shall be back on my feet shortly. Update will be within the week. Spoiler: There will be a movie quote from a movie that was quoted in FFWM12's PotD.
i dont have anything to blame my non-posting on other than writers block. its killing me, man. but good luck getting your story back on track.
Update will probably be on Friday/Saturday depending on how long I get the computer (my mom has been ground-happy lately).
just as the mods here? :D
get it up soon, im bored.
Update is here. Ya, it's short (about half a MW page) but WOW! no person can honestly say that they saw that coming.
EDIT: I was grounded which is why its on Sunday :)
Rexes took off his hood, and removed his mask. James gasped. It was his father.
*Everyone starts to gawk at the sight and wanted to start to fall...*
Wait a minute!
*Everyone looked at him...*
Didn't you state clearly in the last part that Thomas was dead and burried?
*Everyone grabs a lot of clubs and starts to approach him...*
>.>
<.<
Uh... *Runs away*
P.S. How the heck did he "pull himself together" after he was cut in half?
^^
Hes a jedi, goddammit.
excellent twist, JK. i never saw that coming. but one question. is james dad bad or good?
Hmm i have one thing to say you on future and That this is great in general. . And that thing... in future i wouldn't like that much romance thingie as in 1st chapter, jedi should control their passion or whatever pretty much, besides i want to read Star Wars not some mexican soap opera (too rough?), But if it's just first chapter than it is realy ok, and you can keep it, if u wanna make him become dark side and loose her tragicly... Or not..., I realy liked this, tho!
P.S. How the heck did he "pull himself together" after he was cut in half?
:rofl: he was never buried. I'll explain more in the next update about all of this crap...
Here's the next chapter :)
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Chapter 3
“Dad?” James whispered.
“Good, you know what I look like,” he replied, nonchalantly.
“But Rexes killed you!”
“He got close, I’ll give him that much.”
“But, when they went into your room, you weren’t there, only your clothes were.”
“Yes, well, I took them off and just sort of…hopped out the window. I must say, that is not easy when you’ve just been stabbed.”
“So, you were just running around naked?”
“HEY!! I had my underwear.”
“Then why put on this suit, and act like Rexes?”
“Well, I was sure that if you guys – all Jedi really – didn’t meet a worthy opponent, you would grow arrogant. You might even try to act in a tyranny matter.”
“But Jedi don’t do that!”
“After seeing what happened to Bao-Dur, I wasn’t so sure. Your mother completely agreed with my idea.”
“Mom knew about this??”
“Well, she knew what I felt like better than anyone else. So, she just sort of assumed it was me. And, later, she was doing a normal mission, and, as she puts it ‘just noticed me in the crowd.’”
“So this was all just a set up?”
“No, no, only I am. I had to go deep undercover, but I found a master. He always feared that I might betray him, or he was always this paranoid; but I never met him. Contacted me on a special radio.”
“Well, this is some weird stuff going on.”
“You know, I never expected you to take this so well.”
“Really?”
“Well, it just seems to me that if I found out that my father was a Sith lord, and was alive, I’d be just a tad bit surprised.”
“Well, it fits. So it must be true.”
“We’ve been babbling, and yet, you still haven’t introduced me to this very young gentlewoman.”
James turned to face Amanda, and said to her, “My apologies.”
She smiled. “You just found out your father is alive. No need to apologize.”
James turned back to his father. “This is Amanda, Atton and Visas’ other child.”
Thomas shook her hand, and said to her, “You’re fortunate to have them as parents.”
She bowed her head. “Thank you.”
“How’s Jaq?”
“Here and there.”
James was pondering his next question as he asked it. “What’s your next move?”
Thomas was thrown off by this question. “What do you mean?”
“Well, are you going to go back to the Jedi or what exactly?”
Thomas thought about it. He wanted to help catch the Sith. And, really his part was done. His ‘master’ wasn’t going to reveal anymore about himself (he assumed it was a man), so he should go back to the Jedi. And he missed Brianna so much. Finally he answered, “Yes, I shall go back to the Jedi. I wonder what Master Vandar will say when he sees me…”
“Oh…I don’t know how to break this to you, but Vandar died four years ago.”
“Wow, that sucks.”
James laughed.
I can speak into your mind. Don’t say anything. I know who my Sith master is.
James flicked just a little look towards his father, telling him to continue.
You’re not going to want to hear this. But it’s…
James made not reaction. He was crushed inside. He couldn’t believe it.
I’m sorry.
James only blinked twice. Then said, “Let’s go back to the ship.” He gestured to Amanda to stay with him. “I need to talk to you.”
“Yes?”
“I think I know who the Sith lord is.”
“Oh?” she said excitedly.
He hugged her. “It’s mom.”
“I’m so sorry.”
He pulled out his lightsaber and stabbed her. He growled, “And you.”
She grunted. “…What?”
“You’re a Sith.”
She coughed blood. “How did you know?”
“I have my ways.”
“Damn Jedi…”
He shook his head. “I loved you. I really did.”
“I loved you too. But I loathe Jedi.” She laughed grimly. “Goodbye.”
“Goodbye,” he whispered. And he stabbed her in her heart.
He walked back to the ship. He made no reaction when he saw his dad. He just started up the ship.
“You should get some rest. We have a big day tomorrow.”
James just laughed grimly. “Yeah.”
They slept the whole ride there. As they touched down, Thomas asked, “Ready?”
“Let’s kick the tires and light the fires.”
They walked into Brianna’s room. “Thomas…is that you?” she whispered.
“Cut the bull. We know what you’ve been doing,” he replied harshly. They both took out their lightsabers and ignited them.
She appeared to not understand, then she realized that that faзade as done with. She took out her lightsaber and ignited it. “Time to die.” She attacked; going after James’ legs. He jumped and slashed at her head. She blocked it easily.
It was an easy fight for Thomas and James. The only one who could challenge either of them was…the other one. James saw a fault in her attacks, and chopped off her arm.
She screamed. James and Thomas pointed their lightsabers at her throat. “You have lost,” James said calmly, acting as if it was a morning spar.
“Damn you Jedi, DAMN YOU!” she screamed.
Thomas got inches away from her ear and said, “You’ll find that we are quite pesky. Goodbye my love.” And then decapitated her.
“Love’s a bas*ard sometimes isn’t it?” James said, looking at her lifeless mother.
“It has its pros and cons. C’mon, let’s go.”
“Where?”
“Where there is evil.”
“Nice clichй dad, nice clichй.”
Thomas laughed. “Dad? I never thought that I’d hear that.”
“Neither did I.”
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i thought hed be sad to hear vandar died. excellent work anyway :D :thumbsup:
Not bad. :thumbsup: for you.
I think that the next update won't come for another like month +. This is the first time I've been on (the computer) in like a week, and when I am on, I just don't have time to write. So, it may come a lot later than I hope.
Scratch that. It's time for the end, however. 'Tis a sad ending, so get your tissues. Enjoy!
Already? I thought that this would be longer.
This is a very good Fic Jedi. I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the solid work.
It's time for the end
I don't think that there's gonna be another chapter.
Already? I thought that this would be longer.
I just didn't feel like continuing it. I didn't like writing this one as much as I did RotE. Dunno why.
Well that ending didn't really fit other Star Wars things. It was really rather quick.
Well, it was full of tragedy 'cause I'm sad. It was quicker than anticipated, but I'd rather have it stop now then continue it with an update every month or so.
^I mean the ending was abrupt. In fact, it was like 'Hi dad, is my GF evil?' 'Yes, so is your mom' buzz buzz hack 'My evil GF and mother is dead hurray'. But, it was still good to see an ending to this fic.
P.S. I put 'is' in there when it should be 'are' on purpose.
Yeah, it was like midnight and I was tired :)
P.S. Why?
EDIT: Oh yeah, I'm hard at work at my next fic. It won't have anything to do with Thomas/James. Maybe some other time I'll start working on that series again. Should have the first chapter posted today/tomorrow.
I put 'is' in there for fun, and being a professional grammar fascist (I actually get paid to do it!), I have a reputation to uphold. I won't let you horny 13-year-olds ruin that. ;)
Oh!! I was like 'is she he trying to put a hidden meaning or something??' Had me scared crapless. Sorry for flaming you about 20 words ago, but you scared me.
^I don't count it as flaming, but you need to know one thing: I only use hidden meanings to get a good English mark, the teachers love that crap.
the teachers love that crap.
I know what you mean :) Don't forget, I'm just a year behind you!!
Did you ever notice that English teachers are the dumbest ones around? I have yet to get one that hasn't failed Math. :lol:
And it's almost two years, I'm turning 15 on the 26th. :D
Hahahahaha too true. But the stupid ones are usually the best.
You're a son of a *****. :lol: Happy birthday :)
take that back Hall, my english teacher aced her exams and shes one of the best in the world. she even helps some kids out in science and math occasionally
and JK, great fic, sorry i couldnt post earlier but my annuals are coming up, i can spare only 1 hr on the comp per week. that sucks, but good job anyway.
finally read. Sorry about that