The wise words of Hallucination who just made his 1000 post!!!
YAY I'm wise!
@John Skywalker: I don't have much (good) advice, but if you need any I always share it.
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sorry i havent posted lately guys ive bin a bit busy but dont worry the next chapter should be up in the week :)

Sorry i havent updated quickly but i wanted to take my time on this chapter(thanks again for the advice Hallucination :)) and so i present to you chapter 5!!!!!

Chapter 5

The lower levels of Coruscant was'nt a pleasant place at all and John often compared the smell to Bantha fodder. Although John disliked this place his master had taught him to keep allies everywhere as they may be of use in the future. John had a good freind in the lower levels, he had helped John out when he was ten and they had been freinds ever since, his name was Bugs and he was a Dug, John had realised that Bugs was the friendliest Dug he had layed eyes on. John stopped outside Bugs' shop and felth through the force to see if he was in, the force told John he was, so he opened the door and walked inside. Bugs was busy fixing an information droid and didnt notice John come in, John had realised this so he snuck up on Bugs and scared him. Bugs jumped but realising it was John behind him when he turned around he gave a big smile and said,
"Johnny boy, you scared me there, long time no see eh?"
"Yea well I've been busy you know training and stuff, how have you been old freind", John said, hugging him
"I've been well my young freind...what brings you here today?", Bugs asked
"I was wondering if you got the parts for my droid buzz"
"Ah yes i have the droid gun and the defensive shield, you take great care in that cockpit droid", Bugs said amused
"Well if it's improved it has more value for me to sell it", John lied he loved this droid it was his best freind since the person he had never heard from or talked to for six years, she was the reason why he had kept the droid for this long, they stole the droid together however Sidious had opposed to this as he said Sith cannot be passionate to others and that involved love. Bugs handed John the part's and put them in his bag,"thank you Bugs", John said with a smile, he started walking to the door when bugs called to him,
"Please John why dont you stay for dinner", John reluctantly agreed with this he could'nt put his old freind down.
Haven eaten a bit at Bugs' shop John took a taxi back up to the well known areas of Coruscant, he breathed in the smell of engines with relief, he liked the smell far better than that of the lower levels. John went to the Senate chamber so he could see his master lay the law down to fellow Senators. Master Sidious had a dual identity, he had told John of how much corruption there is in the Senate and so he went undercover as a politician but luck was on his side as he moved up the ranks quickly and finally became Supreme Chancellor. John walked into the hall which was totally deserted, he realised what day it was, im getting my first mission today!!!!, he thought to himself and started sprinting off to the Chancellors apartment.
John rushed in and saw Sidious looking out his window in his black robe with his black hood on just like he always was.
"Ah my boy,your late, but your here now so take a seat", Sidious said this with concern in his voice. John took a seat immediately,
"Sorry Master", John said
"Dont worry John onto business now, I have your first assignment"
"Thank you Master, what do you need doing", John said feeling very excited.
"There are a group of non-humans posing a threat to us i need this group wiped out i have all the information about them on this Holopad", Sidous turned around and gave the pad to John who was curious about something,
"But Master if they are'nt humans then what are they". Sidious gave the smile he had been giving John for the past six years the fatherly comforting smile and then said,
"They are a group of Wookies"

Good job, keep it up, I like it :)

'A Group of Wookies'... Hmmm, who could it be? Excllent work by the way. :thumbsup: for you.

thanks for the comments @ Jedi knight ill only keep my work coming if you keep yours coming aswell:). @ Vladimir all im saying is John will face his toughest test yet!!!!

Great work John! Keep it up!

thanks for the comment hallucination:) and you better keep your work coming jedi knight!!!!!!!!! lol just jokin:)

I'm impressed so far man, it's good stuff :) Keep it up, I'd like to read more

thanks liit orda your comments are really appreciated here:)

How is it progressing?

its progressing far Vladimir i think so far so good:)

I made chapter six and chapter 5 at about the same time but i thought i would space them apart and make you lot wait:) its really a prologue to chapter 7 so its a bit short FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!!!!


Chapter Six

John's eyes widened and fear crept into his soul.
"W-Wookies Master? how can i kill them? I dont have a lightsaber."
"Be not afraid and and use your anger and then you can do anything Padawan....your special", Sidious said trying to comfort John, it helped him a little bit but just a little,
"I will take this assignment and i will kill all these wookies for our cause Master"
"Good, and if you do this matter you will be given your lightsaber", Sidious smiled.
After seeing the Holocron and other neccessary facts about the Wookies John went to his room to upgrade his droid Buzz. The cockpit droid had been heavily updraded it had a Holocron of a young John to talk and it also was a translator,and a heat radar to sense who and what was near. John worked on the droid for a while and it did not take him that long to fit the two new pieces to the droid, he was so good at fixing things Sidious had told him. John turned buzz on.
"The holocron is in your system Buzz their in the lower levels,i hate it there,anyway well be going there for a duration of a month Master has already arranged accomodation we will be staying with Bugs", John said
"I do hope we dont stay down there to long Master,they will try to steal my parts", Buzz said, John had regretted in some ways giving the droid much intelligence but it was as loyal as he was to his Master,
"Well Buzz you do now have an energy shield and laser gun nobody will try", John answered and he got his bags and put on his cloak, then him and bugs walked out of his room going to bid Sidious farewell.
As John and Buzz were going to his Masters room an old man came out walking past and not even glancing at John he had a smile on his face, John didnt like the look of him and when he got inside his Master greeted him,
"So may the force be with you on your first assignment alone my young padawan", he said smiling
"Thank you Master, may i ask who that man was that just came out", John asked curiously
"Yes that man is helping our cause his name is Count Dooku,thats all you need to now because you need to get going."
"Yes Master", John said turning and walking out, "I will be back as fast as I can". And as John left Sidious smiled to himself, this will show how much power he has, he thought.

will i get any feedback people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

one word:
AWESOME!!!!

damn, youre great. now, wheres the edit sig button??

WAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Im in RC's sig and thank you for the comments its totally appreciated dude:)

i never knew you guys valued my recommendation so much, :D im honoured :lol:
keep up

Your recommendation means so much because your an awesome writer RC:)

i never knew you guys valued my recommendation so much, :D im honoured :lol:
keep up

I take no higher honor than being in your sig *salutes* :rofl: Nice chapter John! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! (thats fifty-one exclamation points)

I take no higher honor than being in your sig *salutes* :rofl: Nice chapter John! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! (thats fifty-one exclamation points)
And I'm not mentioned in it?

time will tell, dude.
and guys, i honor ForceFightWMe12's opinions much more about my fics since she is the:
QUEEN OF LUCASFORUMS FANFICS!!*thunder gets pissed off at rumbling so much and slaps RC across the face*
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Well guys its that time of day, i bring you chapter 7!!!:) FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!!


Chapter 7

John stood on Bugs pateo one with the force,feeling his surroundings. It seemed that his targets were in the lower parts of Coruscant which made John shudder, he was sick of this place after just one day. He had already planned out what he would do in order to kill these Wookies quickly, he would pick them off one by one, he didnt want to fight them all at once since without a lightsaber he was outnumbered. While John was still meditatng he sensed a worthless being next to him and knew who it was immediately,
"Bugs why are you disturbing me?", John asked annoyed, Bugs was somewhat surprised that John had known of his presence even when he had his back to him.
"I was wondering if you are ready to travel to your first target while he is still alone Sir", Bugs replied
"Yes we will be going after Montu he is the weakest of them all", John smiled, praising his own cunning.
After John and Bugs had breakfast(Buzz had set himself on charge)they set off to find the wherabouts of Montu. John was reaching into the force, asking it to help guide him to where he wanted to go. They had been searching for about an hour when John picked up on something.
"The force is telling me Montu is in there i can sense how weak he is", John said pointing at a cave entrance, and motioning to buzz to make sure he was right. Buzz used his heat sensor to scan the cave, he finished and said,
"It appears a Wookie is in there Master."
"Thank you Buzz im going to sort this one out alone, ill call you on radio if i need help", John told his companions, picking up a baster pistol, a plasma rifle and putting a grenade in his pocket, he felt he needed it somehow. He nodded at his droid and his freind and then starte descending into the cave. The cave was murky and dirty and John clutched his rifle tightly. Even though he was fifthteen his training had taught him to embrace his fear in these situations. John came to a dead end and then he realised, he couldnt believe that he didnt foresee it, he got on his radio and shouted,
"IT'S A TR-", he could'nt finish his sentence as the Wookie hit him in the stomach and all his breath left his lungs.

"Master come in......Master!", Buzz called on his inbuilt comlink but there was no answer.
"We're going to have to g in Buzz", Bugs said and he started getting his weapons ready.

Montu was relentless and was trying to kill John, but John was now asking the force to guide him through the Wookie's lunging fists. John saw the oppurtunity and swung at the Wookie his fist hit the face of Montu but he was to fast and took Johns arm and bent it the opposite way its supposed to bend.
"Aaaaaaaaaahhh", John screamed he knew it had broken, John fell to the floor clutching his arm,how could this have happened?, he asked himself still in agony,im a Sith im better than this pathetic Wookie. But before he could get back up the Wookie picked him up and threw him into the wall, and John lay dazed the force keeping him in consciouness. Montu took out a holocron receiver and the hologram of another Wookie came up and they started conversing in Wookie language. Montu seemed to be telling the hologramed Wookie about Johns presence, John knew he had been set up and if he survived today they would be after him in a matter of days. John sensed that the calvalry was coming in a minute and the force told him to act now, so he forget about his broken arm and gave himself to the force fully. Not thinking he started running at the Wookie but wen he got close the Wookie turned off his holocron and grabbed John by the neck lifting him up, increasing the pressure on his neck. But John knew that buzz had been given time and launched his tazer contraptionwas being zapped rapidly and also couldnt move it was also screaming. John pulled out his grenade activated it and put it into Montu's mouth he the smiled at the Wookie waved goodbye and ran for cover. The wookies head exploded. John looked up
"Well that was a blast". Bugs helped him into the hover vehicle they had rented and john said,
"My hand is broken when we get back put me on your medbay table Bugs"
"yes Sir", bugs replied
"We must now move quickly if we are to kill them all now", John told them
"Why is that Master?", Buzz said
"Simply because someone has given us away to that Wooki and he told his leader about us to, they'll be on the lookout."
And with that they left the place, and were speeding back to Bugs' shop.

Well guys its that time of day, i bring you chapter 7!!!:) FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!!


Chapter 7

John stood on Bugs pateo one with the force,feeling his surroundings. It seemed that his targets were in the lower parts of Coruscant which made John shudder, he was sick of this place after just one day. He had already planned out what he would do in order to kill these Wookies quickly, he would pick them off one by one, he didnt want to fight them all at once since without a lightsaber he was outnumbered. While John was still meditatng he sensed a worthless being next to him and knew who it was immediately,
"Bugs why are you disturbing me?", John asked annoyed, Bugs was somewhat surprised that John had known of his presence even when he had his back to him.
"I was wondering if you are ready to travel to your first target while he is still alone Sir", Bugs replied
"Yes we will be going after Montu he is the weakest of them all", John smiled, praising his own cunning.
After John and Bugs had breakfast(Buzz had set himself on charge)they set off to find the wherabouts of Montu. John was reaching into the force, asking it to help guide him to where he wanted to go. They had been searching for about an hour when John picked up on something.
"The force is telling me Montu is in there i can sense how weak he is", John said pointing at a cave entrance, and motioning to buzz to make sure he was right. Buzz used his heat sensor to scan the cave, he finished and said,
"It appears a Wookie is in there Master."
"Thank you Buzz im going to sort this one out alone, ill call you on radio if i need help", John told his companions, picking up a baster pistol, a plasma rifle and putting a grenade in his pocket, he felt he needed it somehow. He nodded at his droid and his freind and then starte descending into the cave. The cave was murky and dirty and John clutched his rifle tightly. Even though he was fifthteen his training had taught him to embrace his fear in these situations. John came to a dead end and then he realised, he couldnt believe that he didnt foresee it, he got on his radio and shouted,
"IT'S A TR-", he could'nt finish his sentence as the Wookie hit him in the stomach and all his breath left his lungs.

"Master come in......Master!", Buzz called on his inbuilt comlink but there was no answer.
"We're going to have to g in Buzz", Bugs said and he started getting his weapons ready.

Montu was relentless and was trying to kill John, but John was now asking the force to guide him through the Wookie's lunging fists. John saw the oppurtunity and swung at the Wookie his fist hit the face of Montu but he was to fast and took Johns arm and bent it the opposite way its supposed to bend.
"Aaaaaaaaaahhh", John screamed he knew it had broken, John fell to the floor clutching his arm,how could this have happened?, he asked himself still in agony,im a Sith im better than this pathetic Wookie. But before he could get back up the Wookie picked him up and threw him into the wall, and John lay dazed the force keeping him in consciouness. Montu took out a holocron receiver and the hologram of another Wookie came up and they started conversing in Wookie language. Montu seemed to be telling the hologramed Wookie about Johns presence, John knew he had been set up and if he survived today they would be after him in a matter of days. John sensed that the calvalry was coming in a minute and the force told him to act now, so he forget about his broken arm and gave himself to the force fully. Not thinking he started running at the Wookie but when he got close the Wookie turned off his holocron and grabbed John by the neck lifting him up, increasing the pressure on his neck. But John knew that he had given buzz time and launched his tazer contraption at Montu. Montu was being zapped rapidly and also couldnt move it was also screaming. John pulled out his grenade activated it and put it into Montu's mouth he the smiled at the Wookie waved goodbye and ran for cover. The wookies head exploded. John looked up
"Well that was a blast".
Bugs helped him into the hover vehicle they had rented and john said,
"My hand is broken when we get back put me on your medbay table Bugs"
"Yes Sir", bugs replied
"We must now move quickly if we are to kill them all now", John told them
"Why is that Master?", Buzz said
"Simply because someone has given us away to that Wookie and he told his leader about us to, they'll be on the lookout."
And with that they left the place, and were speeding back to Bugs' shop.

Nice work. :thumbsup: for you.

Good work (sorry, I didn't realize that you had updated) :D

not to worry jedi knight youve posted now:) sorry i have'nt updated, but im working on chapter 8 now

One of the best I have ever read.Really its good.

not to worry jedi knight youve posted now:) sorry i have'nt updated, but im working on chapter 8 now

Now???? You should always be working!!! C'mon girl scout!!! :rofl: Just kidding :)

Get the next chapter finished with!!! You have fans to keep happy.

its good. great storyline.

great work, John. cant wait to see more.

thank you all for your comments, and i assure you im working on this chapter:) it will be updated in the next 2-3 days

Ok people i,ve got chapter eight done hope ya like it:) o and an early MERRY XMAS!!!!!!!!! from John Skywalker:)


Chapter Eight

After spending two days on the medbay table John had realised and planned out how he was going to kill the other seven Wookies. He was going to lead them all into a trap. John knew an abondoned warehouse where he had sent Buzz to rig it all with triggered explosives, the force was telling John that the time for them to come was soon, John estimated that he and his freinds had two days before they knew where he was. John remembered that today was the day that he contacted his Master to fill him in on his progress, he made his way to the holocron in his room, he input the coordinates and a blue image of a man with a familiar cloak over his face.
"Ah John you look in good health have you destroyed our problem yet?", Sidious asked
"No Master I have only killed one, but I have set up a trap for the rest, they should all be dead in the next two days my lord."
"Good, when you have finished report back to me in person."
"Yes Master Sidious."
The hologram of Sidious flickered out and John started to meditate, he had decided that he would meditate until the Wookies found him so he was ready in the force, he also warned Bugs not to disturb him for the next two days.
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After meditating and delving into the richness of the hatred, fear and anger of the force the force nudged John and he opened his eyes.
"THERE HERE!!!!!"
He ran down the stairs into the shop and peaked outside the window,the Wookies were trashing all the other houses and shops one by one looking for John, he turned to Buzz and Bugs.
"We'll get into that speeder and make them follow us."
John and the others equiped themselves with with plasma rifles, but Johns real weapon was the force. He kicked the door open(to the dismay of Bugs) and they all ran to the speeder, one of the Wookies saw them and roared to all the rest, who started to give chase to the moving speeder.
"The warehouse is there, Master", Buzz said in his ever calm tone. John didnt bother to stop outside the warehouse, he drove into the wall and through it, they all got out of the car.
"When they all get in here both of you leave I will use the force to get out of here safely", John shouted hurriedly both Buzz and Bugs agreed to Johns orders. The Wookies started coming in John and his freinds were firing but they could'nt hit the Wookies,they must have some sort of shields on, John thought. In admist all the plasma bullets John shouted,
"GO NOW!"
His freinds started to scamper away, he had the detonator in his hand. The wookies were close now. John dove fully into the force, he pressed the detonation button and commanded the force to give him speed, he got out of the warehouse just in time to see it go up in flames. He found Buzz and Bugs waiting for him in the speeder.
"Well we did it master", Buzz said
"Yes good job Buzz, Bugs take us home", John said, and they started to make their way to their speeder.
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The Wookie lay on the floor just regaining consciousness he was about to go into the warehouse and then the explosion happened, all its companions were dead, with tears running down its fur it turned away it would get vengeance on the person that did this, but for now it had to get back to Kashyyk.
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"You have shown great bravery and loyalty my boy, you have proved yourself worthy of the sith, here is your lightsaber", Sidious said handing a white cylinder tube with the bottom being gold and black rubber for a handle to the kneeling John. John ignited the lightsaber, it was blood red.
"Thank you Master", John said deactivating it, he felt proud of his new weapon.
"And now you have proved yourself you shall be named....", Sidious thought for a while and then smiled, "you will be named....Darth Magmus"
"Thank you my Master", John said bowing his head
"Lord Magmus....Rise", and then Sidious realised when his apprentice had stood up and he felt him through the force, The prophecy may become a reality!, he thought.

Great work, can't wait 'til next chapeter! :D

Nice. :thumbsup: for you.

thank you for your comments hallucination and vladimir, merry christmas:)

Merry Christmas to all![/santa]

Oh and since everyone is announcing their sequels to their work(getting more everyday:)). I just wanted to say the adventures of Johny Skywalker will have a sequel and maybe even a trilogy or a quadrilogy(like my idols J.K and RC:)) as this story is coming to an end, I am ensuring the ending will be a giant revelation:). Next chapter is due in about 2 days

Well well folks the end is nearly here for these first set of adventure for ol' Johny boy but there will be a sequel. This is the first of the two last chapters:) (This is also my 100 post:))


Chapter Nine

From an onlooker they would see beautiful blood red whirls of lights carried by men in dark clothing, but to the men it was just another training session on their virander. The older looking man was just backing off the younger looking of the two, who was relentless and quick with his attacking. The younger figure thrust his blade upwards, aiming for the older figure's head, the older figure knocked the blade up and out of his opponents hands and stabbed him, he screamed and fell to the floor. The experience of the old figure prevailed over the young ones strength.
"If we had our lightsabers at high power, and not at the lowest, I would have killed you my young apprentice", Sidious said panting but still smiling.
"Yes Master, but i still gave you a run for your money", John said smiling and panting also.
"If you would practice on your saber skills as much as your confidence you would rival Darth Maul", Sidious said cheekily.
"But Master, I thought i already did", John replied smiling.
"Only in your mind my very young apprentice", Sidious shot back and they both laughed. After composure was back in the air Sidious and John went back into the lounge were they both sat, Sidious shuffled in his chair then he addressed John.
"Lord Magmus tomorrow you will do a task for me,it will be hard, your task is to kill a Jedi Master", he finished John beamed, he had been finally given his chance to avenge the death of the first Sith Lord he ever knew Darth Maul.
"I am thankful you have given me this chance Master", John replied.
"This will not be an easy task Magmus, thats why Count Dooku will partner you on this mission and not your droid", John started to feel anger, he hated Dooku, but he had been showing his face more and more in these past weeks. John could'nt swallow his pride and ego and blurted out,
"Master, I do not need any assistance on this mission, especially his"
"You must do as i say Magmus, for our time to rule will be among us soon". John could'nt do nothing but agree he would do it, but he certainly wasnt going to like it.
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John and Dooku set off the next morning. John had asked Dooku were the Jedi was.
"He is at the warehouse ruins that you blew up with the Wookies", Dooku replied.
"Well this is easy, is he by himself?", John asked.
"Yes i made sure of that, here put this on", Dooku handed John a mask, John was confused by the gift but put it on anyway, he just wanted to get to this Jedi.
It did'nt take long for them to get to the warehouse and the man they were looking for was standing near the dead Wookies burnt bodies. He turned to face them, the man had wrinkly skin and a dry face.
"Dooku?", the man called
"Ah my freind Cypher Dias, I'm sorry but i have to get to the point old freind", Dooku pulled out his lightsaber, at the top near the hilt his saber bended, Sidious had told him that Dooku created it for extra grip. Dooku finished his sentence,
"You will have to die", he held his blood red and slided into an attacking stance, Dias looked calm and replied softly,
"So you brought a boy to aide you?", John was angered by the downgrading comment, he took of his mask and cloak and activated his lightsaber.
"Remember this face, Jedi, because it's the last one you'll ever see", John shouted. Dias' face was one of shock he put his lightsaber back on his belt.
"Oh no J-John Skywalker", he stuttered out, John was confused, he turned to Dooku who was calm as can be and hen turned back to Dias.
"Skywalker? What are you talking about?".

"If you would practice on your saber skills as much as your confidence you would rival Darth Maul", Sidious said cheekily.
"But Master, I thought i already did", John replied smiling.
"Only in your mind my very young apprentice", .

W00t!! AotC quote. Anakin to Obi-Wan (only he said Yoda...)

You really know how to write stories.
:thumbsup: for you.

stop bugging me j.k!!!!!!!!!!:) i was watching AOTC when i wrote this:) oh and thank you Vlad your comments are really appreciated the final chaper shall be here soon.:)

I really like this story John. You are doing a great job. :) Keep it coming!

Thanks RenegadeBore :) i like your fic aswell

sorry i havent updated people but the last chapter should be up in the morning(Just reminding you all this thread is still here:))

im really sorry i havent given you my opinions but i was tring to whack the writers block outta my head.

Great work, though i think it would be more creative if you made up your own dialogues. im not saying that what you wrote is bad but, you know, you can do much better with your talent.

thanks RC, i know what you mean and i assure you ther will be no copying other quotes for the next chapter.:)

Hi all, Ive finally lost my writers block (all the great writers are getting these:)) and i present you the final chapter to this story. I have'nt decided whether to continue the story what do you think? That aside i'd like to thank RC,Jedi Knight,Vladimir and Hallucination who gave me advice after every chapter and also Machiavelli after the review in your thread i think i've had more views, thanks!:)

Final Chapter


"Do you not know your heritage?", Dias asked John.
"No old man, but you are going to tell me now", John demanded. Dooku seemed tense and before Dias could speak he was cut out by him,
"No!", Dooku said, "you will not tell this boy anything", Dooku then charged at Dias with his lightsaber in hand,
"NO!", John said and force pushed Dooku, he was caught off guard and crashed into the wall and lay still, unconscious. John watched Dooku for a second, satisfied that he would not interfere with them anymore he turned back to Cypher Dias.
"Old man start talking, i want to know about my heritage", John said.
"Yes", Dias nodded, "you deserve to know. You were born on Tatooine and you mother is a woman called Shmi Skywalker, she still lives on Tatooine. When she gave birth she gave birth to twin boys."
"I have have a brother?", John interjected with tears in his eyes,
"Yes, his name is Anakin and he is training to a Jedi."
"A Jedi", John spat, "He has picked the wrong path", John paused, whiping his eyes and then asked Dias,"How did me and Anakin recieve different paths in the first place old man?", John asked.
"Well you and Anakin are prophezied for different things, he is supposed to bring balance to the force and you...... you will-", Dias stopped suddenly at first John thought he was taking a deep breath but then he realised a red lightsaber sticking out of Dias stomach.
"NOOOOOOOOO!!", John said all was lost to him know he knew he had a mother and a Jedi for a brother but he didnt know his purpose in life, he felt lost. Dooku smiled at John.
"You fool, you know the truth but it's no good where your going Magmus", John felt hot rage, he ignited his lightsaber and without saying anything he lunged at Dooku aiming his saber at Dooku's head, Dooku parryed the tryed to stab John, he knocked Dooku's Blade away and started a barrage of attacks,Dooku blocked but he knew he could'nt keep the defense up as John's rage was making him stronger and stronger. John faked a move to the right which Dooku fell for and John kicked his saber out his hand then gave Dooku a roundhouse kick to the jaw, Dooku was dazed John was poised for a finishing blow, but before he could electricity was attacking him and he was screaming in pain he turned to see it was Sidious before he passed out. Sidious had electrocuted John enough to leave him unconscious, he turned to Count Dooku.
"Come Dooku and bring the boy we need to do this before he wakes up",
"Yes Master", Dooku said not questiong Sidious he picked up John and they left.

After about an hour Sidious and Dooku got to a pad full of starfighters, Sidious stopped. Dooku turned to Sidious.
"What is it Master?", Dooku asked.
"I know what is to become of the boy", Sidous said.
"What is to become of him?", Dooku questioned again.
"I've read the prophecy many times over and it says he who is the chosen one will be forced to spend time on his own to find himself.",Sidious finished.
"What does that mean Master?"
"It means that young Skywalker is to be exiled", Sidious pointed to one of the starfighters and Dooku knew what to do, he put John in one before Sidious told him to put the ship on auto pilot and let the force decide where he was going to end up, the starfighter started to take off with John, still unconscious, inside.
"Now come Tyranus, there is much we have to do for the Sith to rule". Sidious said.
"Yes Master". And while they where walking off the Starfighter was leaving the atmosphere, going to wherever the force wanted to take it.



End

Is there going to be a sequel? And don't mention it, it was nothing.

There will probably be a sequel Vladimir but i cant say when it will be posted.