Jack looks at Vatters silver lightsaber.
Jack: "Uhm... I don't have a lightsaber yet. so... My first task will be: Build your lightsber, right?"

Star: Calls academy "come phh in phhhh help... phhhh find...phhh cassuas...phh send pph he..phhhhh" *static*

WTF you here that that is star we need to help him no time for practice we need to go jack if you want to go with us here is my foil from when i was a bounty hunter but be carful with it it is sharp like hel neo en ninja you are going to with me to

runs to a ship says can one of you fly>?? i need a second pilot sits behind chair in the ship okey enyone that wants to fly as second pilot (you now what i mean by second pilot right??)

Originally posted by JackTheNibbler
Jack looks at Vatters silver lightsaber.
Jack: "Uhm... I don't have a lightsaber yet. so... My first task will be: Build your lightsber, right?"

This task will be yours alone. Once you construct it, come back to me for the crystal....:bdroid2:

Jack grabs some metal parts for the lightsaber construction and enters the ship.
Jack:"I can fly, Master Cassus. I'll be your co-pilot. Let's go. And while flying in hyperspace I have enough time to start building my lightsaber. I think I got all the parts I need, except for the crystal."

okey much beter

okey enters hyper space
spawn:en jack here i give you a lightsaber we wil make one when we are back we have no time for you because i have no crystal with me :D so just take this one

out of hyper space okey lets land on that planet

lands on that panet

ow my god look that beast !!!!!! beast turns around he sees us

spawn:OW MY GOD RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

follow me runs to treas hides

spawn: okey we lost him now let me handel

walks forward to the big beast

spawn:come on piece of ****

beast grunts very hard

spawn:CANT YOU DO BETER PIECE OF **** COME ONE

beast runs to me with a big speed

spawn: okey finally jumps on beast turns on lightsaber hits him with lightsaber

beast trys to let me fly of his back

spawn:RUN NOW GET TO CHAINS EN STAR TAKE THEM EN LEAVE WITHOUT ME NOW I WIL TAKE CARE OF THIS BEAST !!!!!!!!!!!

beast jumps in the air comes on the ground with a big speed i fal off the beast sees you running to ship with chains en star he runs to you i say NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

spawn:uses force jump to jump on beast beast grunts hard hees beginning to run en jumps i fly off he runs to me very hard he puts his mouth open i turn on lightsaber ready to jump

spawn:NOW IT ENDSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jumps in mouth of beast beast closes his mouth then it grunts then i use my lightsaber to cut his hole ******* mouth open his hole mouth bleeds i jump out his mouth jumps on ground use force to chokoke him to death

spawn:falls on knees huh huh huh now it is done then a other rancor comes running to me i hear him i turn around

spawn:OKEY COME EAT ME PIECE OF **** !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

beast runs grunts very hard !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jack: "Master Cassus. We can't let him here. I must help him."
Jack turns on his lightsaber and runs at the Rancor unconsciously using Force speed. He jumps up to the rencors head and slices both of his eyes. "Gotcha, you damn beast. Now take this!!"
Jack throws a Plasma-Grenade in the rancors mouth and ran off with Cassus.
Just now he noticed a strange noise. It sounded like:
"Lightsabers. The dark Jedi are coming for us."

Suddenly a group of sith and about 10 tenetarck thingys come out and start attacking, then 2 more jedi shuttles come down from nowhere and jedi start coming out and fighting the sith.

Me:"Attack!!!! Spawn, quickly get behind them using the dead rancor so they don't see you and attack their master! Chains and DH come around this way with me to the front with the rest of the jedi; padawan Jack, you had better stay back, try to use force powers on those sith **** heads by just concentrating, let the force flow through you!"

*tons of sith all come out of nowhere and start attacking, we are outnumbered 2:1*

Me to a jedi:"call in more support, we are not going to get very far here without more assistance."

I fight 3 sith at once with my doublebladed lightsaber, but then more come and one gets me in the side, but I quickly kill 4 of them with deathfield, and then I fall back a little to heal.

Me and 2 other jedi masters start using battle meditation.

The odds are now evened out, but I am still wounded and losing blood. I use all my strength killing 8 dark jedi; then I collapse.

A force healer comes and brings me to my shuttle just as republic special ops reiforcements and a few more jedi arrive.

The tenetrack are still not dead, and some more trained rancors come, also the full attention of the sith has been drawn, and they send in more troops and dark jedi.

Me: I will join you, I can distract the sith easily....

*Uses Force Disguise to make himself look like a Sith apprentice*

Me: They will never see it coming........

*runs ahead into the darkness*

spawn:hides behind dead rancor, see walking the dark jedi master leading the attack, jumps in the air in front of the dark jedi en troopers,spawn: al jedi standing behind me, dark jedi master walks to the front, dark jedi master: okey jedi you want a fight you get one ATTACK MY SITH,spawn: use force to make a force field in the front of the sith,dark jedi master: okey jedi lets fight,spawn: FEEL MY POWER jumps on sith sith blocks sith slash in the direction of my feet i jump he mist use lightsaber to slash in the direction of his middel body he blocks i use force wafe he flys against wal i jump to him with a high speed he jumps way i cut i hole in wal i turn around i jump to sith he blocks he hits me to my shoulder,sith: I AM THE MASTER HERE DIE!!!!,spawn: NO WE ARE THE MASTERS OF THE FORCE i jump in air i trough lightsaber to him he blocks his lightsaber falls down i come down, spawn: okey now we wil see who is the master of the force, sith en me uses force wafe i fly against wal en sith flys to wal, spawn: uses force stasis field it works i use force to pick my lightsaber i jump to sith stasis works out i say surrender or die!!!!! sith ,sith:i wil never surrender,spawn:then die !!!!!!!! uses force to pul his hearth out his hole middel body splashes open,spawn: grunts!!!!! now sith you die!!!!!!!!!!!!!! removes energie field now my jedi knights attack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jack tries to focus on his powers and gets to choke one of the sith to death. After that another sith attacks him with his lightsaber. Not having much experience in swordfights, Jack stays in Defense, but then he kicks the sith in his balls and cuts of his left arm. After loosing his arm the siths attacks get much weaker and Jack quickly manages to gain the upper hand in this fight. His anger gave him extra strength. After a couple of attacks he wins his first lightsaber battle. The sith lays dead to his feet (without head and left arm).

*Still disguised as a Sith Apprentice, I approach the leader of the sith assault*

Me: Master, what shall I do.....

*slides hand toward silver lightsaber...*

Sith Commander: March foward and attack the Jedi. Leave them all dead.

*draws saber and decloaks, becomeing Vatter again*

Me: Surprised?

*chops up commander :eek: *

Me:Thank you healers, now, we fight! Forward!
elite dark jedi comes up to me and I slice his head off, then I go to join Neo in killing the leaders by using force speed to kill anyone in my way.
*uses force sense to try and locate Chains*

More dark jedi are still coming, and a small group of jedi with me are trying to seal the doors they are coming through, while others cover us from behind
*seals doors*

Me:Haa! Beat that sith B*stards!

*uses mind to comunicate with spawn*:Where are you?

Spawn:using force to talk with star i am behind a building the sith are to strong i can see them from here they have a plan to set the troopers in a trap so we most retreat now

*Spawn, Star, Jack, and Neo are all surrounded by about 15 sith and 45 soldiers*

Sith Lt.: Surrender and your lives will be spared...

*Spawn, Jack, and Star draw their sabers while Neo meditates.*

Sith Lt.: You threee would be wise to surrender with your frien...UGH!

*All the sith and soldiers fall to their knees while Neo still meditates, Spawn, Jack, and Star begin disarming the soldiers and putting neural restraints on the Sith.*

*once everyone is restrained or disarmed, Neo stands up and everyone is back to normal, the Sith Lt. looks at him in curiosity*

Sith Lt.: but how......?

Me: The force :ben:

Jack: "Good work, Master Neo. We've got them. But what are we going to do with them now?"

Neo: "Ask Spawn, he's in charge."

spawn: okey we most go now for the sith sned more troops walks to neo en jack en star okey we most go but where stands the ship :D

Hey!!! I'm in charge!!!

Me:"Let's go fast, I don't know how long that sealing will hold up against those soldiers and dark jedi."

*jumps into shuttle*

"Let's get out of here! All jedi return to the academy, and special thanks to the republic special ops."

*All the ships are loaded up, and as we leave the planet, republic warships begin to bomb it*

Me:"Well, that's the end of two things: the successful battle on Korriban, and the unsuccessful great hunt.

Back in the academy, there is a large saramony, everyone that fought on Korriban is there, and awards are being given out to everyone.

Me:"Spawn, you are now supreme master up with me, Neo, you are now a master as well. Chains, you are now top Knight, no hard feelings, but you are not ready to become a master yet, just a little more training, which Spawn will give you"

*Medals are given out to all the jedi and soldiers*

P.S.:Where is Chains? He missed the whole battle! I can not think of any more story right now, so somebody else do something, or we can end this thread.

me:gets a nice medal en gets a new rank supreme master

Cassus:walks to star,dam ey remind me to never go to a great hunt,en why has jack not a jedi rank en a medal, walks to jack ey this medal is for courage, en jack now you can cal yourself jedi padawan en welcome to the jedi order


P.S i now maybe one like the sith attack or academy en then we most find a new planet to set the academy on, en we most destroy the leader in one of the bomb ships

Jack gets the medal from supreme master Cassus.
"Thanks master. It is a great honour for me to serve the council as new padawan. Excuse me now: I'm going to upgrade my new lightsaber and train a bit."

P.S.: I agree with, Darth-D. An attack on the academy would be a good plot.

Cassus:but jack first you most say what color crystal you want

Jack: "I want a green one, Master."

Jack gets a green crystal and goes off to train.

Cassus:walks to gus are you ready to train

Me:Walks over to Jack "Here, take this as well, it will help you stay on the light side of the force."

*hands Jack a solaris crystal*

"And Spawn, you take this for good luck"

*hands Spawn a Kryat Dragon pearl*

"Now I to must go train and reconstruct my lightsaber, the focusing crystals are out of place."

P.S.:Great idea, I kind of had something like that in mind!

Cassus:thanks master star walks to work bench reconstruct lightsaber puts in pearl then my lightsaber ready i walk to my room later i come back walking to workbench puts in opila crystal for incredibel power then when i am ready i walk to star master i am going to a lost planet to find silver en maybe gold crystals is it alright i leave to that planet i am back in one day

To Spawn: You can do whatever want!

*goes into chambers to meditate a little, then comes out and goes to train young padawans :wan:*

Cassus:walks to ship enters en flys away to a unkown planet ciau

*sitting in the academy's council room*

Me: "Hello Master Vatter, how progresses your training?"

*before vatter has a chance to answer, the whole academy starts to shake, and the roof starts to collapse on our head, but I use the force to hold it up*

"Get the hell out of here! Evacuate the area!"

*as he is running away, he notices through the cracks on the roof that a mothership is right above the academy*

Ahhh!!! The ceiling collapses on master star, lukily, everyone else has been able to get out and are heading into the woods to hide.

The sith send down tons of troops and fighters to kill all the jedi around.

P.S. Where is everybody? Iknow i have'nt been on for ages but come on!

Im back!
PS What is goin on?


*Chains realizes that Master Star is not here, so he turns around and runs toward the collapsing academy*
*Inside the Sith are looking for survivors*
*Pulls out saber*
"HYAH!"
*Kills 3 guards*
*Finds Master Star's body*
"Master?"
"No! Master!"
*Sith assasin comes up behind and wacks him over the head with a force pike*

i am back!


*i fly to the academy en i realized there was a sith mothership !!!!!i say to my self OH MY GOD
*the ship shoots on me i try to make a perfect manouvre but it fails I AM HIT I AM GOING DOWN
* i crash in the middel of the academy i see everywhere sith assasins
* i pul out my orange lightsaber i see chains cab use some help i jump to that sith assasin en i cut his back open
*ey chains you alright where is master star?

Sith Gaurds and dark jedi swarm the academy and then they let rancors out outside to kill the jedi. They destroy the communications center so nobody can call for help and then they blow up the hanger.

*I have a huge piece of rock over me and i am stuck and barley alive. sith come around and a dark jedi lifts off the rock and says: 'look at the powerful master now!!!'*

*i use death field and kill all soldiers but dark jedi is still alive.*

the dark jedi pulls down a part of the academy so chains and DD are blocked off and then he draws his lightsaber and prepares to kill me.

"now you die great jedi master!!! My master will be most pleased and greatly reward me for your death. And on top of that i will get your famous lightsaber!!! Actually i think i will interagate and torture you first-"

*i use the force to hover up in the air because my leg is broken then i begin to fight the dark jedi.*

He is stunned and i quikly give him a heavy blow but he blocks it. as we fight i slowly loose strength but then i finnaly catch him off gaurd with a backstab and he falls to the ground.

DD and Chains use there combined power to break through the rock and then heal me and we go to escape the academy before it falls down on our heads.

On the way out we find a pocket of sith and dark jedi and begin to fight them:slsaber: :lsduel: :saberb: :saberr: :saberg:

*we run to the exit then those sith en dark jedi are blocking or way

*we pul or lightsabers they do the sith fired some blaster shots i used the force to block al then the dark jedi jumps to us i use force to hold them of for a few secs

*those dark jedi jumps to us one slashes his lightsaber in the direction of me i block i jump i pul a rock from the wal en let the rock crashes on the dark jedi he is dead

*now master star vatter en chains has to face 3 dark jedi !!

*i use force storm and kill 2 dark jedi but then 4 more come and we begin to fight them with sabers*

I start fighting one and then quikly kill him and then i sense that 3 masters, 50 soldiers, and 20 dark jedi are coming so i use the force to comunicate with chains a DD and i say 'come on let's get out of here to many more are coming!!!'

On the other side of the planet the sith have began landing troops and taking over the cities and stuff. The jedi police there are no match for the sith army.

We use force speed as all the sith start to round the corner and we all manage to kill about 4 soldiers and 1 dark jedi with various force powers.

Outside of the academy there is a huge battle and the jedi are not winning but there hopes go up as they see us come racing out of the academy. I give the order to fall back into the woods twords the sacred waterfall ruins which has alot of jedi stationed there.

"Chains you stay with us because you are a very powerful fighter and you to DD."

We gather a force of the best masters including Vatter and go take cover with the rest of the jedi in the woods. It takes three days to get there but the sith are nowhere near and there a lots of jedi from an academy over on the other side of the planet plus the master from that academy who's name is Vendar (not the yoda dude from Kotor just a jedi master)

Vendar, DD, and i start talking about what we should do about the sith and then vendar says that we should go and search for the anciet jedi gaurdian masters who live in the deep forest. We agree and then decide to take the best fighters and search.

All three supreme masters (vendar DD and i) are going as well as chains, vatter, and two jedi from the other academy.

We venture into the forest and sense that there is a tenatrack somewhere and then we relize that it is fighting a rancor so decide not to disturb it.;)

*then from nowhere i was gone then 1 sec later i landed in the sith mothership i pul my lightsaber then i was surrounded by 10 dark jedi i kil 3 then one of them uses his lightsaber to cut my lightsaber in 2 pieces

*later i realize i was in a TURTORE chamber i tought WTF later a sith master come he used his force storm on me i scream aghhhhh then he sayt obey the dark side i say never of my life!!!!!!!

*later he tortured me enough en i was tured to the dark side!!!!

*i land with a shuttle in front of you i step out of it

*a guy with a dark jedi master robe en a hood walks out of the shuttle on his head you saw nothing because his hood made a shadow in front of his face the only thing you saw was his yellow eyes later you saw it it was me !!!!!!!!!!!!1

*i pul my orange lightsaber (it lookes like darth vaders lightsaber :p ) i say star its between you end me !!!:sithm:

*i do not draw my saber*

"DD you have been down the darkside before, and u know wat it is like and so does chains. You know that it is not what you want. You force me to fight you though. I am very sorry that this terrible thing has happened to you."

*DD just stands there with a smirk on his face then swings lightsaber at me very fast with force speed:mad: but i just manage to dodge and draw my saber and we r stuck in a saber lock until i jump and flip over him but he blocks me too;) . I tell none of the others to get involved then reach into DD's mind and try to find the light side of the force in him through all the darkness.*

P.S. No killing without permission from the person u r going to kill:rolleyes: and DD you changed your jedi score test as i was posting this

"Come on DD, you know you shouldn't be doing this..."
*Uses his Signature force move(Force Orb) to make a huge enregy orb in front of him*
*The force orb hits DD and dissapears*
*Chains uses the orb to read DD's memories*
*He sees the memories of the Sith Master torchoring him and decides to take immediate action*
*Chains starts hovering in mid-air and then starts to glow*
*The memory of the Sith and DD becoming one is ripped from his mind and swallowed by the orb*
*DD starts to grow a bit weaker, but then realizes what happened and Force pushes me*
"ugh...."
"Please DD, stop!"
*DD Force Chokes Chains*
*Chains falls to the ground.*

*DD uses stasis on others so they can not try to interfere*

Me: DD what have you done you killed chains (:confused: I think) now you are becoming dangerous i am sorry but i will have to fight you.

DD: No 'Master' star i will destroy you and all of the jedi and tell them all your plans, or you can come to the dark side!!!

*dark jedi masters run in out of nowhere and i begin to fight for my life using deathfeild and storm and then my lightsaber carefully executing each move with perfect persision, a quik left slash and i glance DD's side and he gets very angry and the dark side clouds his mind as he goes and hacks up vendar and jedi from the other academy and i try to stop him but am surrounded by loads of dark jedi masters and can not escape*

*chains lays on the ground and the rest of the people are hacked up and dying exept for vatter and whoever else i missed out and they are in stasis*

*DD goes up to vatter and dark jedi all use stasis on me at once and i resist but then DD comes in to and i break. they use the force to hold me up in the air as DD uses force storm on vatter. I can not watch and i suddenly find strength out of nowhere and escape stasis and begi fighting with everthing i have i kill all the masters and then i go up to DD and tell him 'you can't beat me DD i am invinsable the light side is to strong for the dark side now follow the right path or i will be forced to destroy you'*

Then i realize i almost killed my best friends

i turn back i look to the dark jedi masters i got mad very mad !!

i pul my lightsaber i jump to the dark jedi masters then i killed them al!

i walk to my star sorry master for almost fighting you forgive me:rolleyes:

*Stands up slowly, and cluthing his side*
*Hands and side all bloody*
*Uses Force Orb again. This time Chains destroyed all DD's memories of the sith*
"Is it over?"
*Collapses onto his knees and then faints*

PS- Im not dead....yet

I say to DD that I was suprised that he fell to the dark side but happy he is back on the light side now.

*we both use force heal and try to heal chains but his wounds are to deep and the dark side is in them.*

*vatter (where is he anyway?) is on the groun fainted and we carry chains and vatter with the force*

suddenly out of nowhere come the ancient jedi we were searching for!!!

"hello valiant masters of the force Star and Chains." one says

"we have come to find you and ask you for your help against the sith who have destroyed our academy- wait... somthing's not right about you i sense no force power."

*suddenly ancient jedi uncloak themselves and turn out to be the strongest sith assasins come to hunt us down. Now dark side power is everywhere and we can feel it strongly*

They draw their lightsabers and we prepare to fight them but it seems like there are just too many for us to handle.

*me: uses force to tell DD that we should run with force speed*

*ok good idea master star

*i use force speed to run away then i sense a republic fleet onderway then they came out of warp they where fighting then a republic shuttle landed to pick us op a republic soldier came out he says get in ok we run in the shuttle the shuttle in

*the shuttle is going to a republic ship then we where aboard the republic ship i run to the bridge i say lets get in warp i sense there are more sith ships on the way go in warp

*he goes in warp

*then a sec when we where going in warp bam the planet exploded

*master star we are the most save on coruscant shal we go there?

*I lay bloody and out cold in the healing chambers aboard the Republic Shuttle*
Intercom- "WARNING! Sith Boarders in Decks 1-6"
*I meet up with Star and Destroyer*
*Sith assasins and 3 Dark Jedi Masters attack us*
*A Sith Lord appears out of nowhere*
"Attack!"
*A few Jedi Knights join us*
*I use Force Orb and destroy the Sith Lord's memories*
*The Sith Lord lies on the ground, uncouncious*
*The battle ends*
-LATER-
*In the medatation chambers the ex- Sith Lord is being trained in the ways of the light*
"Master Star, look, I found this old sith relic in the cloaks of the old sith lord"
"It appears to be a key..."

Hello, anybody?
REPLY ALREADY!:mad:

*looks at the relic.*

"it i strong in the force but i don't know waht it is for. We must go to Dantooine and search the achives. But now we must fight the dark jedi off the ship."

*draws lightsaber and charges at nearby sith*

*flashback of when he was a sith*
*A dark shady man is teaching some students*
"When the time comes... we will use this key to unlock the portal... and we shall win a war before it even begins..."
*Faints*

*We kill nearby sith. I carry chain's body and we go to the bridge.*

"Captain seal the door to the bridge immeadiatly!" the door slams shut but the sith begin to plant explosives.

"Master Jedi we must eject the bridge section," the captain says."it has a hyperdrive and we can get away."

We agree and the whole thing ejects from the main ship then jumps to lightspeed with no destination. Five hours later we come out of hyperspace and it turns out to be ORD mandell, which to our luck is a republic supply depot.

Chains is put in a hospital and is still asleep.

*far away on a sith cruiser... 'Master everything is going as planned, but the artifact was lost...'

'What? How dare you!' *tortures with force lightning*