Okay, Hello again. Making another new one. No offense to Jedi War and alot of the others, but new people coming to the forums don't want to read through five pages of text to get to the story. Here is where you create your character for my new RPG, through the lines. THE STORY DOES NOT START HERE.

The plot is that Yavin IV is under seige. Rebel troops have been using gurilla tactics to survive against the Imperial troops combing through the planet to find them. They have decided to make a bigger stand now. You can be Imperial or Rebel troops. No Jedi please. No killing the other sides actual characters, but normal NPCS can be killed. This is a biggie right here. Read this throughly. Read this. USE PROPER SPELLING AND GRAMMER. This sounds like a pain, but just type your post into a word processer and then copy and paste it into the post. If you don't understand why, go back a while and read Partners in Crime. That was great. Use that for an example for you, except for the last post. I beg of you, USE PROPER SPELLING AND GRAMMER. Please.
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Name: Gufyar Wiles
Side: Rebellion
Bio: Gufyar used to be an Imperial officer. His mission was to bomb a planet, to wipe out it's entire population. He was doing well, when he saw a mother crying, holding on to her baby. It was not even a year old. His heart filled with rage against the Empire for attempting to kill them. Since then he joined the Rebellion. He has been a valuable asset to the Rebellion ever since.
Weapons: Modified Blaster Cannon, Blastech DL-44
Strengths: Knows Imperial Stratagies, Good leadership, Skilled at long range weaponry.
Weaknesses. Melee combat.

Name: Kalnot Nartook
Side: Rebels
Bio: Kalnot grew up in a rebel military home, so he went inot fighting fairly young, and has been fighting the empire for a long time.
Weapons: E-17D Sniper Rifle,DL-44 Blaster Pistol and a vibroblade
Strengths: VERY accurate shot wiht the sniper rifle, is physically strong, and melee combat is okay
Weaknesses: not good against ranged soldiers and droids.

Name: Nightwing
Race: Human
Side: Unaffiliated, but rebel friendly at the moment
Bio: Nightwing was his call sign. He was orphaned when the empire took him from his home planet and started training him as an imperial investigator. He was well versed in many forensic techniques, languages, weapons and imperial law by the ripe age of thirteen. Nightwing spent all of his known life on an imperial space station until his natural father was able to free him. It was three days after his thirteenth birthday, though he did not know it, when his father was able to infiltrate the imperial station and convince Nightwing to enter his cargo vessel. When Nightwing learned that he was being kidnapped, he reverted to his tactical training and killed the deceitful person, not yet knowing that it was his own father. Nightwing only learned of his past, and his father, threw records that were kept on the ship. He felt awful about what he did, and soon went into seclusion working tirelessly to become strong and agile.
Weapons: Dl44 blaster pistol
Strengths: Skilled at forensic evidence, hand to hand, agile.
Weaknesses: No piloting what so ever, not a real team player (likes going solo), not the greatest sniper, but he can hold his own in a firefight.

One more person and I'll start the story up.

No offense to Jedi War

Thats my thread.Ill join anyway.Dont worry no offence taken either.


Name: Zoric Bastar
Side: Imperial
Bio: Zoric when he was 17 was recruited for Empire as a spy.Zoric went into a rebel base and stole some plans.He escaped without any detection.
Weapons: E-11 Blaster Rifle,Sniper Rifle,Two Vibro-Blades.
Strengths: Zoric is very well skilled in melee and is a very good pilot.Is physically and mentally strong.Good with blaster in short range.
Weaknesses: Is not very accurate with a blaster in long range and is bad sniper.

Yeah it's not like the story's bad or anything, It's just it's five pages long. ;)

Name: Carson Omecca
Race: Human
Side: Imperial
Bio: Carson has grown up in an imperial family. His father is a commander of an Imperial fleet so he has been working his way up the ranks rather fastly. He is just on his way to Yavin IV.
Weapons: E11 Blaster Rifle, Thermal Detonaters, vibro blade
Strengths: Marksmenship, Piloting
Weaknesses: Melee Combat

I was wondering if there is a time period for this. Is it after the battle of yavin? I think that could work out well because, The Rebels abandoned Yavin 4 shortly after the Battle of Yavin in favor of other hidden bases, such as those on Thila and Hoth. Maybe a small group (us) was left behind, but was unable to stop the empire in a up front battle. I don’t think we can have it before because the base was secret before the millennium falcon brought the empire with the homing beacon that was hidden on the ship.

Yeah that would work. I didn't really have a set time for it, so we can go with that. :)

Name: Solus

Side: Rebel

Bio: Solus was tiny and awkward as a youngster and suffered unmercifully at the hands of fellow students. Unable to defend himself physically, he resorted to avoiding being seen or interacting with people. Solus spent all of his free time camping out and learning to survive on the land.

Solus was raised by him mom, his dad was killed when he was young by the Empire. The Empire was trying to route out rebels in his area and accused his father of being a sympathizer. Repeatedly through out his life the Empire would search their home smashing pictures, destroying furniture taking their possessions. This fostered a deep resentment towards the Empire.

Shortly after his 15th birthday during one of the Empires intrusions, his Mom put up resistance to their actions. For her actions she was killed while Solus watched. Unarmed Solus sneaked out of the back of the house and headed for the forest.

Not much else is known of Solus, shrouded in mystery, his past is.

Weapons: E-17D Sniper Rifle, DL-44 Blaster Pistol

Strengths: Stealth, Expert Marksman, Pathfinding, Stamina, Agility

Weaknesses: Size and Strength Solus is only 5’10 and 160 lbs. Solus is not much of a hand to hand fighter. Solus has no piloting skills. Solus is not much of a leader.

Name: Bac Rueben
Age: 27
Bio: Being hunted down by bounty hunters most of his life, Bac desides to join the Imperials to help out in their cause.
Side: Imperials
Weapons: Assassin kit
Strengths: Awesome at stealth and hiding
Weaknesses: Bad at fighting unstealthily

Name:Zorak Yoke
Alignment:Empire
Bio: Zorak is a bounty hunter that was made into a bounty hunter.Zorak is a guy who normaly sits in the back of a cantina with concealed Vibro-Darts.Zorak was a Elite Guard for the empire.Now he works as one of the only bounty hunters worth hiring any more.
Weapons:Vibro-Darts,Cammando heavy pistol,and a Virago fighter craft.(the ship under my name AKA avatar)
Strenghts:very smart and good With thrown weapons.
Weakness:His ship needs to recharge often and is constanly under attack by other bounty hunters.