Hey guys, first post. Used to be slapshot16. Sorry I missed ya. Anyway I'm making a new RPG here. Please make it as descriptive as possible. Describe the world, your surroundings, fights... Everything. Just follow my example. No little 1 line posts. Also, I know this sounds like a big pain, but copy and paste your posts into a word processer. Do a spellcheck. It adds so much to the story. Thanks.

Okay the story is we are a bunch of captives. We all have to band together to escape the Imperial Interdictor. Everything we have, we have to pick up along the way.

Character: Gufyar Wiles
Bio: Gufyar Wiles was born on Corusant, and grew up the son of a wealthy inter-planet merchant. He recived the best of education and combat training. He is proficient with most weapons, including his bare hands.

IC: Gufyar Wiles struggled with his captors. He shook and spun, bit and kicked. His Stormtrooper guards held him at length by a piece of cord with an E-11 blaster rifle at his head.
Gufyar let the rope go slack, and suddenly jumped at his captors. One beat him into submission with the butt of his rifle. Gufyar slumped to the floor and passed out.
Gufyar woke up, his head spinning. He took stock of his surroundings. He was in a normal Imperial prison cell. Simple gray walls on three sides, with an energy wall blocking his way to the outside. He grunted and once again passed out on the floor.

Character: Zoric Bastar
Bio: Zoric was born on the planet of Bespin.He was trained to be a very excelent blastmen but when the Imperials came to his city Zoric was captured.


Zoric stood and watched one of his fellow captives get beat up and knocked out.Zoric watched a stormtrooper pick him up and carry him away.Zoric took the situation to his advantage and span around and kicked his stormtrooper guard in the head knocking him out.Zoric picked up the rifle and waited for the rest of the stormtroopers to turn around.As they turned around Zoric blasted a few guards in the chest killing them.A guard behind him shot Zoric and stunned him.

Character: Nilton Hestark
Bio: Nilton grew up in a smuggler home, he learned to use a blaster pistol when he was 4, he went to blaster rifles when he was 9, he first used a speeder bike when he was 7, and first piloted his first one man ship when he was 14, and has been piloting ever since, until he got captured.

Nilton got taken in and didn't offer an resistance, conserving strength and thinking of a plan to escape, he got taken to a small cell that was dank and dirty, it appeared not to have been cleaned in a while, he saw another captive across from him.

Gufyar Wiles woke up groggily and looked across the cell to the captive on the other side. He was casually sleeping, back against the wall, sitting up. Gufyar turned his attention to other things.

He smiled his "oh so famous" smile. He pulled a vibro-knife out of his pants. There was one place even the Imperials weren't willing to search. He smiled again and started digging at the wall.

"no use, even if you get through the first layer, they got a force sheild through the second, i know, i stole the plans for each major prison a while back, i know how to get out, and i'm working on a plan to get out fo my cell, just be calm" Nilton whispered.

Zoric was thrown into his cell and woke up a few hours later. When he woke up he saw two of his fellow captives talking. "So what the is the plan?"said Zoric.

"like i said working on it--wait, shh" Nilton pretended to be sleeping when the guard came by him Nilton stuck out his hand under the repulsor field, someone had dug a bit before, he tripped the gurd and then used his toher hand to knock him out and take his card, he unlocked the cell, and he unlocked the other cells too.
"hurry and, and be quiet too" Nilton grabbed the man's blaster rifle and handed the pistol to Guyfar.

OC: Guys, don't forget to add in neat little side-quests and surprises. You don't have to follow the story all the time.

IC: Gufyar put his vibro-knife away and checked his pistol out. Nothing special. He silently motioned for the other prisoners to follow him. As they walked, he thought of the best means of escape. Their only hope would be to steal a ship. Docking Bay C was not that far off. He took off a quicker pace.

A half-hour of walking got Gufyar starting to doubt his memory of the ship. He bit his lip hard. The gaurds had been found. There was no question of that. Why hadn’t they had the sense to hide the bodies? Pretty soon the ship would be searched over. Every passageway, every room, every possible means of escape would be searched. And, the Docking Bays would probably be on lockdown. This was not good.

"why are you leading, and slow down, i said i knew the way around, now it wil take us longer to get to the docking bay, now come one, follow me" Nilton sneaked off down a passage way and silently took out a guard and tossed his rilfe to zoric
"no one fire unless we are fired apon first, got it?" Nilton spoke in a whisper.

Thanks for the rifle and ok"said Zoric.Zoric followed his fellows.

Gufyar eyed Nilton suspicously, but didn't say anything. "Who is this guy to take command? All he's leading us to is a certain-"

He stopped short along with the rest of his comrades. There was a small "clink clink clink" as a fragmentation grenade came rolling around the corner. Gufyar swiftly went into action. He kicked the grenade back the other way. It exploded halfway down the corridor.

Red blaster bolts burst through the air all around him. He couldn't tell where exactly they were coming from because of the smoke from the grenade. He took cover around a corner and starting firing through the mist.

((I don't know when this is exactly taking place, but is it ok if it takes place after the destruction of the first death star at least))

Name: Corrin Jaynar
Description: Corrin is a Bothan who has been working for the rebels ever since he helped steal the plans for the second death star, he was one of the few survivors. He has been helping the rebels ever since. He has a slightly high rank and was on his way in his X-Wing on a recon mission to gather more info on some Imperial Plans. Unfortunatley he was caught.

Corrin was still fresh in his orange rebel jumpsuit as he was being escorted to the prison cells. Two stormtroopers were escorting him, he knew he was going to get executed. Suddenly there was an explosion and the two stormtroopers hauled him to the scene of the crime. There was blaster fire and one the troopers with him told the other one to stay and watch the prisoner. The remaining stormtrooper held the gun at his chest but his eyes strayed the fire fight. He was still handcuffed but he saw his chance. He kicked the gun out of his hand and he tackled him to the ground.

Zoric laid down on his stomach so it was very hard to see him through the mist.Zoric opened fire and heard"Arggghhhh".He thought he must have hit a stormtrooper.Zoric got up and took cover behind a pillar.

Gufyar ducked back behind the wall. The blaster fire had picked up. There were more of them. Suddenly, a blaster shot was heard very loudly behind them. One of the other prisoners was lying on the ground, dead.

Gufyar quickly turned and fired a shot into the leg of the stormtrooper. Then, he went into melee mode. He struck twice at the side of his opponent’s head, and then kicked him hard behind the leg. The stormtrooper was not expecting this bold move, and he went into a kneel with the pain. Gufyar drew the pistol and fired once between the eyes. It was all he needed.

Gufyar took an E-11 blaster rifle and two fragmentation grenades off the dead stormtrooper. He put the dead prisoner to the side and pulled a pin out of the grenade. He flung it down the hallway with all his might. He heard the “clink clink clink” and heard the explosion. Screams of pain were heard, but the blaster bolts just kept on coming.

Nilton turned around and fired off shot with a great calm in his eyes, he hit several trooper, he knew the were out gunned.
"come on, lets move out this way, Gufyar, Zoric, cover the back everyone else follow me!" Nilton ran down the hallway going around one corner a trooper was there, nilton shot him with presicion, he kicked up his rifle as he was running, he looked back and waited for everyone to arrive.

Gufyar nodded and turned to face the oncoming Stormtroopers. He and Zoric stood side to side, rifles to eyes, looking through the mist. The first stormtrooper came charging. Gufyar quickly switched his E-11 Rifle to full auto. Some bullets hit the trooper. Others went flying off into the mist.

Gufyar fired some more rounds through the smoke. How long could they keep this up? He and Zoric were vastly outgunned and outnumbered. The thought hit Gufyar like a thunderbolt. Nilton! He was trying to take command of the slaves. Maybe he was working for the Empire the whole time! Gufyar was furious. But, then again, maybe he was wrong. Maybe Nilton was just being a strategic thinker. Either way, Gufyar and Zoric would have to find Nilton. Either to thank him, or to kill him.

Zoric fired and fired trying to kill every stormtrooper. Zoric looked at Gufyar and saw he was thinking. Zoric dived on Gufyar as a few shots came his way. Zoric said"We have got to get out of here." Zoric got up and threw a grenade into the mist. He heard alot of dieing voices. This mist was way to thick to see through. Zoric got Guyfar and hoisted him up and said "Lets go."

Nilton yelled down the hall
"hurry up, stop fighting and run!" Nilton ran back to where the slaves were running from, he took both his rilfes and fired simultaneously at the troopers.
"move it guys go go go!" the slaves ran past them and he saw zoric and gufyar crawling away, Nilton ran up to them and grabbed them and started drag-running with them.

Corrin was able to get the handcuffs off after a man shot the stormtrooper he was fighting. He followed them and grabbed an E-11 on the way. He shot a stormtrooper while he was following these men. He shouted ahead to them,"Thank you for saving me, but I suggest we hijack a ship and get out of here." Blaster bolts shot over his head while he was running.

Gufyar shot a couple of rounds over Corrin's head. He dove to the ground as Gufyar's shot's flew overhead. He extended his hand to help Corrin up. "Good Idea, hijacking a ship, but I would imagine the docking bays are closed up tight."

Corrin grinned as he got up. Gufyar continued talking, "So, I think our best bet would be to get to the Control Center of the ship. Unfortunatly, that's half-way across the ship. Who's with me?"

Corrin nodded to Gufyar and the Rebel Bothan shot several E-11 blaster bolts behind him.

"wrong again, access tunnels underneath this place, no one knows about it, except the makers of the ship, or someone like me who stole the blue printes, they should be around here somewhere, hold them off while i try and find them." Nilton ran hsi fingers along the wall,floor and cieling.

OOC: Curt-Man, I think your character is just a little bit overpowered with knowledge of the ship. The fun part of it is overcoming challanges, and if we have a secret tunnel system leading to wherever we need to go, that's not very much fun.

IC: Gufyar turned his attention to the stormtroopers that were getting closer with every pounding step. There were two of them, and, lucky for Gufyar, he had hidden behind the wall before they had seen him.

He heard the steps and silently counted... "One..." The sounds grew louder. "Two..." He could now hear the metal armor clanking against the floor. "Three!" He stuck his foot out and neatly tripped one, at the same time disarming him. The other one turned to face him as he grabbed his vibro-knife and dealt two swift thrusts at his opponet's chest. The stormtrooper fell with a groan.

The one he had disarmed had gotten up. He took a look at Gufyar, now armed to the teeth with two blaster rifles, slung over his back. A pistol was stuck in his belt along with a fragmentation grenade. He held his dripping, bloody knife in his hand. The stormtrooper got himself ready to dive. Gufyar twirled the knife and flicked it. The stormtrooper would have screamed in pain if not for the vibro-knife lodged in his neck.

(a ship? i thought this was a prison? well whatever, and besides i never said you had to do what i suggested, you could go attack the hanger if you wish)

Nilton had a hard time finding any creases or tunnels
"wrong place, lets go" Nilton fired both his rilfes at the stromtroops then ran off in another direction.

Zoric went by himself to the controls of the prisoner ship. He ran down the hall and stopped at the corner. He saw a four stormtroopers and an Imperial Officer coming his way. Zoric took out his rifle and turned on the silencer. Zoric jumped out surprising the guards and killing them with ease. Zoric dragged them into a empty room and took of his prisoner oufit. He got the Imperial Officer outfit and put it on. Zoric took the key card and all the belongings of the 5 and locked the door and walked down the hall.


Zoric went into a room where he saw Gufyar. Zoric said "Hey its me Zoric dont shoot."

[i]Originally posted by gonyjets [/i

Okay the story is we are a bunch of captives. We all have to band together to escape the Imperial Interdictor. Everything we have, we have to pick up along the way.
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OOC: An Interdictor is an Imperial Capital ship.

IC:"Hey Zoric. I guess great minds think alike, huh?" Gufyar had on stormtrooper armor, and was just now fitting on the helmet onto his head. "See, I had to take the head from one and the regular armor of another... One had a big hole in the body and the other had a big hole in his neck..." He motioned over to the two dead bodies slumped against the wall.

"Well, now we can walk through the ship without getting shot at. C'mon. Let's head over to the Command Center. After that, we hijack a ship and get off this ship...

"Yeah lets go" said Zoric. Zoric lead the way and as he approached the command center there was a ID scanner that allowed you to get in. Zoric took out the card that he took off the officer and sliced it through the ID scanner. The door opened and Zoric passed the card to Gufyar and went in. The door shut behind him. Zoric walked up to the controls of the ship. There where about twenty stormtroopers and 6 imperial officers.

Corrin looked ahead to the group and said,"But what about the tractor beam?"

(oh, heh right)
"i'll take care of it, you go" Nilton ran off and he stopped at the prisoner items room, he went in and shot the guard that was there, he got his clothers and all his slicing items, and his trusty DL-44. he holstered it, he headed off to there the generator was, he snuck along the wall and shot 2 storm troopers and then disabled the tracktor beam then as he went out of the room he was confronted by 8 troopers, he fired wiht both of his E-11s and ran away at the same time, he hit a few but they kept on running and firing at him. Nilton dove out of sight into an empty room and the troopers passed, he turned on the light and the room was filled with deactivated droids, he took out his droid slicing card and reactivated them all then told them to attack the bridge and the hangar.

(Nice twist Curt-Man)
The bridge door shook violently. The officer and stromtroopers went out to the door to guard it. Gufyar laughed silently. "Well, this was alot easier than I thought." He pulled the pin on his fragmentation grenade and threw it as he and Zoric ducked behind some consoles. A loud bang and screams followed. Gufyar laughed again. "Oh, that was so easy!"

Gufyar looked hopelessly at the glowing mass of buttons on the console. "Well, Nilton and his knowledge of Prision ships will help a little bit here..." He took one last look at the mass of buttons and gave up. He opened the door for Nilton and Corrin.

Corrin went thru and saw more stormtroopers ahead and one of them tossed a thermal detonater at him. He kicked it back as fast he could and it exploded in between the two groups.

Nilton leisurely strolled in
"told ya i had taken care of it, the hangers is being assulted too, so i will release a ship, and he can hop a ride and we'll be out of here in a split, now lets see what we have here" Nilton walked up to the console and started acessing datafiles and plans and then finaly unhooked a ship from the docking bay
"alright, lets get out of here."

Gufyar nodded and walked out. Luckily for them, the nearest docking bay was not very far away. They looked inside and saw a skirmish line of Imperial troops, 3 ranks deep and twenty long. "Dang. That's too many for us to take on..."

lets even the odds shall we???

Character: Tain, Imperial Colnel
Bio: Tain was born to an imperial parents on Coruscant. Went to the imperial officer academy and through good tactics and hard work, managed to rise through the ranks to become Colnel.
Weaknesses: greed, overconfidence
Strengths: loves battle, white knuckle action


> Tain Is on the front line of the troops, with his trademark Trandoshian slaver shotgun> He shouts> DOnt let them pass men!

"Let's see how these guys take a grenade" thought Gufyar. He reached for a grenade and realized he ddin't have any. "Dang" he thought. He kicked at the wall. As he did, the panel popped out and revealed four repeating carbines. "Lucky me" thought Gufyar as he picked one up.

Gufyar fired the carbine into the masses of stormtroopers. There was no way that their small group could take out three score enemies. "How are we gonna do this?"

Zoric took a two grenades and passed on to Guyfar and Zoric himself tossed one into the stormtroopers blowing them away. Zoric then took out his blaster and fired at the remaining troopers.

> Tain is hit by several pieces of shrapnel in his torso, but still keeps up the high spirits in the remaining men.>Now having seen where the blaster fire was coming from, he orders the rest of the stormtroopers to charge at the rebel scum.

Zoric continued to fire at the Imperials. Zoric then realised that a stormtrooper was advancing on Guyfar so Zoric shot the stormtrooper in the back and saw Guyfar totally suprised. "You ok?" yelled Zoric.

"Yeah I'm fine," said Gufyar as he winced with pain. A spot on his leg was oozing crimson blood. He picked up the carbine and looked back at the troopers...

Gufyar's breath left him. They were charging. The small group of prisoners would simply be decimated. "What are we gonna do now?"

"you guys are pitiful" Nilton then jumped and grabbed the edge of a hanging platorm, he kicked the strom trooper and mounted the turret, he started blowing away the storm troopers.

Zoric turned around saw Nilton firing at the stormtroopers. Zoric saw another turret next to Nilton with no trooper. Zoric goes and gets into the turret and fires at the advancing troops.

Nilton saw a stormie advancing on guyfar nilton jumped off and landed on the storm trooper breaking his neck.
"you can thank me later, lets go, screw the rest of them, zoric!, lets move!" Nilton ran to the fastest ship their, which was pretty well armed.

Tain is still alive. His troops decimated, he makes a last attempt to stop them escaping. he swiftly walks over to the control panel and presses the button which closes the hangar doors! 'Now let's see you scum escape. He then moves to the hangar turbolaser control and begins shooting all of the spacecraft in the hangar. 'HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA'.!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gufyar saw what Tain was doing. He tossed a grenade up into the control tower, blowing the door controls. The doors flew open and Tain flew out of the control room, Gufyar thought for sure he was dead. Man, it's bad to be wrong sometimes.

The only ship left reminded him of the ship his buddy Han Solo got off of Lando. The Golden Pheonix was painted on the side. It was beautiful, but there wasn't time to admire it.

All the prisioners ran in. Gufyar jumped into the pilots seat and realized it was just another mass of jumbled buttons. "Uhh... Nilton, you fly this thing. I'll take the upper turret and try to hold them off!" Gufyar bounded up the steps and go in the turret.

Zoric ran up the ramp and into the ship. He jumped into the co-pilots seat. "Ok lets do this" said Zoric. He turned on the power and said 'Nilton take us out of here.I will get in the other turret."
Zoric ran and got into the other turret.

Yep you guessed it, Tain is still alive!!!!! But only just. His body is coated in blood, his arm is broken, some of his internal organs are exposed and his uniform is torn. " HAAHAAAA I'm Still alive fools !!!!! hahahaa!!!!!!" Tain exclaims with a physcotic tone.

Tain hobbles around as he sees the prisoners taking of and decides to take another last attempt to stop them. He limps over to a brand spanking new Prototype I-Tech TIE fighter and starts it up. "NOW IT IS TIME TO DIE SCUM, FOR REAL THIS TIME!!!!!". He full throtled the ship straight at the GOLDEN PHOENIX and started firing the laser cannons. "DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE !!!!!!!!!!!"

(That is kinda godmodeing Mr.Piercy)

Originally posted by Evil Dark Jedi
(That is kinda godmodeing Mr.Piercy)

(but wouldn't it be taking control of my charater if i died from that grenade blast????)

(You could say you got up but the ship had taken off and you ordered Tie's to go after the ship)

Unluckily for Tain, the Prototype TIE had some pretty dodgy wiring, and after going no further than 5 metres had stopped. So instead he ordered an entire wing (72 fighters) to pursue the fleeing craft. (happy now?)