ok,here it is.a Jurassic Park rpg thread.but this has a twist,as alot know.its in starwars,so we get to watch a wookie eaten by a tyrano.LOL.my characters brought a capital ship into hyperspace and out of the galaxy.

any character type is availeble,except for the hero units from the movies.meaning,for example,my characters a clone shapeshifter that isnt in the empire and is force-sensitive.use your imagination with creating a character.

fill out this format:
name:
species(optional):
specialty:
age(optional):
squad (optional):

just one thing:NO NUKES!
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name: Delta 43,also known as Assassin
speciatly:all
squad:Omega squad(fictional in a way,considering i made up the members)

the capital ship came out of hyperspace,and i didnt see any other ships flying around where coroscant would be located.i saw nothing but a couple planets,possibly seven or eight."zeta 392,scan every one of these planets" i told one of my squadmembers.after a quick lifesign scan,he responded "theres nothing alive on any of these planets.." which i found incredibly strange."hey..what about that one,over there?" i asked,pointing to a greenish blue planet."scanning...scanning....." zeta said,right before the console exploded."ok.......lets not try scanning that planet again and just land somwhere" i told,in which he nodded his head.i walked over to the com and said over the intercom,"Omega squad,Delta squad,Alpha squad,and every other commando squad,get to the hanger and prepare to depart." i said.not long after that,we were crashing face first into the ground in the dropship.i tried to get up from the crash,but only had a crate end up nearly breaking my helmat.i blacked out afterwards,with a killer headache.

Name: Bac Rueben
Age: 24
Species: Human
Speciality: Bounty hunting

Bac Rueben sat comfortably in his Hunter V that he made. He looked for a new planet that supposedly had different creatures of great power. The commonly used name for the planet was "Earth" and it was blue and green with white clouds. That's all the information he knew. So he continued looking, hoping the power in his ship wouldn't run out.

Name: Viper
Age: 22
Species: Human
Class: Bounty Hunter

As Viper exited his firespray ship and stepped onto this new world he wondered what was so special about it. It was called Earth. But either way there was something on this planet that was worth a lot of money. Viper turned. He had been given several men to jelp him out. They were struggling with a crate containing explosives. They slipped and dropped the crate. A loud band echoed around the clearing.
"WATCH OUT YOU FOOLS!" Viper shouted
None of the men had been injured but Viper had lost a crate of explosives he could need.
"In future be careful other wise..."
A loud roar echoed around them
Viper fell silent
"what the?" he whispered he heard a crashing through the undergrowth a huge beast entered the clearing. Viper could tell by it's teeth and jaws it was a meat eater. He picked up the scanner and pointed it at the beast. It came up with -

Alosauraus. Carnivor. Dinosaur?

Viper backed away. The other men were unsure. Suddenly the dinosaur or whatever it was roared again and attacked the men. The men yelled and attempted to run. One was taken up in the beasts jaw and was eaten alive. The man's screams echoed and another roar could be heard. But this time whatever it was that had roared was bigger....a lot bigger

i got up from the rubbel of the crashed dropship and looked around.i was the only one onboard,so i knew they had already set up camp.i walked out to find a crate fall on my head.again."what?do the crates hate me?" i asked myself.i hit a few switches on my armband and my visor became alot clearer,and i picked up some electrobinoculars(or just plain binoculars or,as some call it,electros) and scanned the place.a campfire was setup a bit ahead,maybe at the most 50 yards.i walked forward only to hear an unearthly scream.now that creeped me out,especially with the following high-pitched growl.i replayed the audio file and scanned it and somthing strange happened.it showed,

Velociraptor.more commonly known plainly as a Raptor.carnivore.Dinosuar.Cretaceous Period.

that got me confused.i hit a couple more switches and it displayed the details of this ''Raptor''.it showed things never recorded.

The Velociraptor,or Raptor,is a Cretaceous Dinosaur of the planet Earth.Unexpectidly,the Raptor can see prey that is not moving,Unlike the Tyranosaurous,which is also known as a T-Rex.Most debate whether or not the Raptor should replace the T-rex with the title of ''King of Dinos".The Raptor has one very large claw on each foot,which could split through even the hardest armor in several ways.The Raptor is not an enemy you would want to encounter on your summer vacation.

i exited the window and shot a stun blast behind me,then above me,and to the sides.four unconsious raptors rolled to my feet.i tyed them up and dragged them to the camp to meet my squad and delta squad sitting around a fire having somthing to eat.i dropped the raptors at the camp and sat down to research all these ''dinosaurs''.

Viper didn't need to hear that roar again. He ran to speeder. He heard a loud thumping noise and a crashing made Viper stop motionless for a moment. A huge dinosaur crashed through the trees, it's jaws were massive and it had a large sail on it's back. It was enormous. He quickly scanned it.

Spinosaraus. Carnivore. No info.

Viper pressed the ignition and and skidded around to watch the beast. It roared at the other dinosaur and it charged. It's huge jaws clamped around the alosauraus neck and Viper heard a loud crack.
"Lets Go!" Yelled one of the men. The other two guys jumped onto the speeder. One took the gun and the other just hung on for dear life. Viper pushed on the accelerator and they sped away. The Spino- thing seemed to think they were more of a meal than the other beast and started to chase them. The speeder was a lot faster though. The gunner blasted but he couldn't get a good shot. Viper turned sharply so not to hit a tree but as he did this the man glinging on lost his grip. He slipped off the back and was thrown into the monster's path. The thing stopped.
"NO!...No! Please...VIPER! AHHHHHHHHH!"
The huge beast stepped on the man's legs and ripped his head off. He then ate the rest off his body in a single swallow. Viper hadn't stopped. He had kept going. He was going so fast he could not see the edge of a cliff. The huge beast was so close. By the time viper saw the ledge he had no where else to go. The thing was right on their tale it was either fall into the water below or be eaten, and Viper knew which one he preferred. He sped towards the edge. Just before he got to the edge the man in the gunner seat was taken by the beast. It took him up in it's huge jaws just as the speeder dropped. Viper heard the man scream but knew he could do nothing. Vioer pulled up. He was getting close to the water. this thing didn't fly but it could hover. Viper pulled up harder. The speeder hit the water with a huge splash. Water leaked into the speeder and it started to sink. Viper quickly swam to the edge of the huge river. He got onto a rock and saw a shadow move in the water....

i finished reading about all the dinos and seeing their image,and i wasnt about to become food to one of them.i looked over at a raptor and then looked through my backpack and found the one thing i was looking for:meat.i took it out and released a raptor,and every time he tried to eat me or any allies i shocked him and any time he didnt i tossed him some meat,and in five minutes he knew who was an ally and who wasnt.i decided to take him down to the river for a drink,only to see a speeder fall in and sink to the bottom,then to see somone going to shore.i ignored him,since i had my atention focused on a shadow in the water.i drew my DC-17 commando pistol and shot it with a fully charged blast as it was about to take a snap at my new friend who was about to get a drink.i dragged it onto the shore and scanned it,and it came up with a Deinosuchus,which was the first ever known "Alligator".i saw a couple more and loaded up my trandoshan heavy repeater and opened fire at the ones coming at me,and told my Raptor friend to take cover behind a rock and slice at anything......atleast i thought he heard me.he started slicing and everything.in a couple seconds a large amount of dinos were floating in the river,which had blaster marks and empty shells floating across,along with the river starting to turn red.i grabbed one of my spare DC-17 weapon pack i always kept incase i found anyone who might need them,and tossed it across the river."use the rifle for close combat,the grenade pack as anti-armor,those binoculars as a sniper,and that glove to send a knife into an enemies skin or armor then back." i said,then added,"oh,and the binoculars and the grenades,those are the attatchments,and use the right ammo.oh,and i think you might need some grenades." i said,then tossed about fifteen grenades over to him."make sure you dont waste all those on a lizard smaller then my hand,or even all on a raptor pack.if you need cover,head across the river.there are some turrets setup there." i finished,then walked away with the raptor.i heard a large roar and shot a merr-sonn rocket straight up,then a roar of pain followed,thenthe cliff colapsing simultaneously until a large dino fell into the river quite a distance away,dead.i then walked off back to the camp,wondering what would happen next.

Viper took the stuff but did not thank him.
"I don't need help"
He jet packed out of the canyon and back onto the ledge he had fallen off. He watched the soldier for some time. Viper turned to servey the landscape properly for the first time. Vast forrests and stretching plains. He knew the closer to water you were the bigger things got. He had already come across some nasty dino- things and he had no wish to meet any more. But he reminded him self where was the fun in that. He returned to his ship. When he arrived his ship was in ruin. A group of somethings had smashed his ship up. It would take a while to repair. Viper set to work. Withiut the extra man power this would take days. But being a bounty hunter Viper had devices to stop things seeing him. He put up the cloak and his ship vansihed from the eyesight of anyone outside the perimeter. Viper watched various dinosaurs walk past but nothing as big as the one with the fin. The more Viper thought about it the more he came to the conclussion that the solider who had stopped the gator from eating him was an enemy. True he had given him equipment but from what he was wearing he looked like an assasin or bounty hunter. Viper's armour gave him away easily. the sleak desighn had been taken from a friends armour (Jango Fett). He took his helmet off and breathed the air. The peace of the night was broken by screams. So there was more people on this planet than Viper had first thought. He heard some crashing noises. A man who looked like he had been attacked stumbled into Viper clearing. He was bleeding from his arm. And A group of, a qucik scan, Velociraptor followed making noises to each other
"They can talk" Viper said stunned
The man was on the floor crawling away. One of the raptors beared it's teeth and jumped. Viper jumped out of the cloak and shot the raptor. The raptor hit the floor dead. The others looked at each other and ran away but Viper knew they'd be back. He grabbed the man's arm and dragged him into the cloak. The man gasped
"Thanks"
Viper wasn't in the mood for chat
"Why are you here? I was told this planet was un-inhabited by humans"
"So was I, but I've already met a few bounty hunters. Something about a contest"
"A contest?"
"Yeah, it's a contest devised by some sick people. The last man standing wins from what I hear"
"So this is just a game?"
"It appears to be"
Viper looked around he grabbed a blaster rifle and gave it to the new comer.
"Here you might need this"
"Thanks, I know it's odd but could I stay with you? My squad was wiped out. Im not in it for the money" He added seeing Viper's look
"We were tracking someone here. They had attacked our ship but we managed to repair it and go after them"
"Fine, just don't get in the way. I don't think Im in it for the money anymore" he added smiling
"I just want to leave"
The new comer looked at Viper's fire spray ship
"It won't work" he said
"what?"
"Your ship. they've all been sabotaged by the creators of the game"
Viper looked at the man
"Whats you name?"
"Tiscalli"

i walked back to camp and sat back down."just sitting here is boring!if were supposed to be scouting the planet why are we waiting to be eaten?!?!im gonig to go find somthing to shoot." sev said."going out to shoot somthing?i cant stand this jungle...this place gives me the creeps." scorch said before sev left."Ah, Scorch... Nothing better than a jungle hunt. Hiding in the bush, putting a plasma bolt through a hostile's cranium...*sighs wistfully* makes me feel alive" sev responded."Okay, now 0-7s giving me the creeps." scorch said,right as sev walked off.then the turrets came up and alot of dinos came.apparantly they were afraid of him.hehe......anyway,when sev came back,they all ran off."im gonig out to scout the area." i said,and they all followed me,including the raptor.after awhile,we saw some hostile raptors running down the cliff path to our left,and i loaded up a sniper and shot them all down."see what i mean?" sev asked,seeing i sent plasma bolts through their craniums.i walked off,ignoring sev.eventually we came to a structure that was covered in plants.but inside,it was completely unharmed.dino 'toys',a buffet....its almost as if the place was meant to be an ammusment park.i looked over my shoulder and saw somone wearing a light blue shirt with a yellow hardhat under some rubbel having a brown substance in a wrapper.i walked over to see if he was still in the right mind,meaning not crazy."eh..more survivors?here,have a candy bar.its about all i can reach from here." he said,and i scanned the wrapper and it came up with somthing called 'chocolate'.the worker looked at the scanner,then me and everyone and everything else."i must be loosing my mind from all the chocolate..." he said."wh-whe-where are y-y-you from?" he asked,acting kinda shifty."kamino,kamino,kamino,kamino,deralia,tatooine,
deralia,kamino,trade federation cruiser,ORD mandell,and nar shadaa." we all said simultaneously.delta squad and zeta 392 were clones from kamino,me and omega were from deralia(even though im a clone) and so on.(THE OOM-9 was in our squad.) he looked around and then he probably went crazy for a second.i moved the rubbel by hand,but not using my actual arm(meaning i used the force) and then the worker truly went crazy.i shocked him with a stunstick and that seeme to put him in the right mind again."clones....droids...jedi.." he said,still shifty."ya ya you can remind us of our species some other time,now lets find any other survivors." i said,then walked off with everyone following.

Viper viewed this Tiscalli. They sat in silence for a while watching the sky grow dark and listened to the strange noises. Several times a few dinosaurs went passed. As they did Viper scanned them. None of them were meat eaters but they were huge in size. Viper had his duel rapid fire pistols on his person all the time and gripped them constantly. In time Tiscalli fell asleep. Viper stayed up. Close to day break Viper heard the noises of a group of people walk towards them. Viper kicked Tiscalli awake.
"wha-?"
"Shhh"
Viper withdrew his pistols and Tiscalli grabbed the rifle Viper had given him the day before and they stood still listening.
A group of men came out of the undergrowth talking. Viper glanced at Tiscalli and then back at the men. They were clones the same model as Jango Fett's clones. Viper gripped his pistols and pointed at Tiscalli and then a turret. He got the message. He manned the turret and pointed it at the men. Viper put his helmet on and stepped out of the cloak to confront them...

"so let me get this straight,some guy thought up our existance and classified us as 'fake' and just made our history into movies,right?" i asked the worker.he nodded."wow.what do you guys think of that?" i asked them.they just stood there."i get your point." i said,answering my own question."wait.....wheres delta squad and zeta 392?!" i yelled when i noticed they were gone.i backtracked and found some footprints stopping then heading a path 90 degrees opposite of ours."always keep an eye on delta squad or theyll walk off." i said to myself.i followed the path and found them holding their rifles at two people,one with a rifle and the other with a turret.i loaded up my minigun and rolled into the clearing,as they others drew one of their great weapons and rena drew her lightsaber."wait....wait...LOWER YOUR WEPONS!!THEY ARENT ENEMIES!!!" i yelled before we attacked them and they attacked us."i remember you.your from the river,the one that was almost deinosuchus food" i folded my minigun into a carryable form and tossed it back in my backpack.the rest of my squad lowered their weapons and/or lightsaber."ok omega,your the smartest droid in the squad,do we stay at our camp after scouting or move here,becouse it seems this place has alot more room then an area about five or ten yards each way." i told the lieutenant in our squad.he nodded,being after a battle he was a droid of few words."you need the help?our camps back about one hundred yards" i asked the one operating the turret

name: Darrick Dominia
species: Human
specialty: Piloting; pistol dueling
age: 28
Bio: Darrick knows somethings about dinosaurs, like which will try and eat him and will ignore him.

Darrick hid in some bushes when he heard some men talking. He ducked farther down in the bushes as the men he heard talking walked up to a man(Viper) who appeared out of no where wearing clone armor. He finally remembered that the armor looked like Jango Fett's armor and helmet. He then focused on what was to be said or happen right in front of him.

"Sure" Tiscalli said and stepped off the turret but Viper held out hand
"Why are you on this planet?" he asked
"I doubt your here for this last man standing thing?" he said
Viper did not put away his blasters. When he saw the others looking at him he said
"Don't worry. Maybe you feel secure here but I don't...this place...is starnge...such beasts..." he trailed off
He heard a a noise. He turned towards a bush
"Come out I know you're there" he said to the bush
Tiscalli rasied an eyebrow and said
"Viper...I....er"
"Theres someone in there"
Viper rasied his pistols
"If you don't come out I'll assume your a foe and shoot you out"

everyone in my squad drew their weapons again,and this time instead of a minigun i ignited a blue lightsaber i had attatched to my belt."im with that guy on this,and if you dont come out your gonna die by alot of blasters and two lightsabers!" i said.there wasnt a sound.i didnt focus on the roars of dinosaurs or the crunching of leaves and trees in the distance,only on the sound of the lightsabers idling."well,you gonna come out or are we gona have to blast you out?" i asked.

Darrick heard people yelling for him, "Damnit shouldn't have moved" he murmured to himself as he slowly started raising his body to surrender. As he looked at the men comng into view he noticed a T-Rex silently watching them from behind.

When he got up he had his hands raised, "I'm no enemy" he shouted to the men, "Trust me, i'd be a valuable partner. I know many things about these dinosaurs And I know for a fact, a meat eater is watching over you guys right now. Look up if you want....." he shouted as all the men looked up noticing the T-Rex mouth above them.

Viper swung around
"oh shi-"
Viper rolled out of the way as the beast came down to attack. Viper blasted at it with his pistols. Blood spurted from it's side. The scent of blood rose....and a gigantic roar echoed through the fores. Birds scattered. The T- Rex must have known what it was becasue it fled. Viper stood absolutly still. His heart thumping.
"Another T Rex?" asked Tiscalli
"No....it sounds a lot bigger...even bigger than that Spino thing"
"Then what?"
"I'll check" Viper ran back into the cloak and grabbed his scanner into the input section he typed
Larger than 16ft (Average Spinosaurus height, T rex average height 14.5ft)

it came up with one reading: Gigantosaurus (average height, 19.6 ft)

Viper looked up and heard a crashing noise
"Here it comes"

"if its bigger then a spinosauras then you might want to hop back on that turret!" i yelled.i shifted my feet in the ground."its coming from the north." i looked at the others."by the way,who are you guys?" i asked before getting my weapons loaded and attatching my lightsaber back to my belt."its quite annoying if you gotta work with people you dont know"

"Im Tiscalli" yelled Tiscalli as he jumped onto the turret
Viper just grunted (BTW it's not that im being a miserable sod it's just my character, Viper, is a miserable sod and wants to remain unknown)
"This is odd" said Viper
"How come?" Asked Tiscalli
"How come we've only met the meat eating dinosaurs? why not any others? This game is starting to...." he didn't have time to finish the roar was louder than ever it was close
"Im going to get a good cantage point" Viper grunted
He used his jet pack to get into a huge tree
"Don't worry about him" Tiscalli said to Delta 43
"He's just a b-"
"Tiscalli! Armed that turret yet?"
"Err...no good idea"
Viper breathed a sigh of relief. He didn't want the news that he was a bounty hunter getting out seeing as he had fought many battles against the clones.
"SOunds like theres more than one...." viper murmered
suddenly three huge dinosaurs came into the clearing.....

a security guard survivor was taken up in a dinos mouth,and everyone started firing at it,me firing a quad-shot.(anti-air gun scaled down to a compatible size as a backpack.) i slashed at the legs of one,then remembered a power.i sent an electricity bolt into a dino and it collapsed,sizzling with electricity.i swiched into force speed,which slowed everything to the point where time could almost collapse,everyone looked like they were shooting very slow.i was the only thing left moving fast,so i sprinted around the legs of one dino,slashing away until it fell.time sped to the normal time,and i jumped into force speed again and in 0.3 seconds i was back with rocket launchers."USE THE RPGS TO TAKE THESE GUYS DOWN!" i yelled.delta squad launched four,then omega,zeta and then everyone else.i kept a special rocket i modded.(looks like the one from half lfie 2.) i shot a rocket up in he air then guided a laser right between the dinos eyes,and the rocket followed,with a loud 'THUD!!!!!!' following."im delta 43 by the way.now excuse me while i go grab some supplies from our camp." i said,then was back very fast on account of i used force speed."we might need auto turrets." i said,while i was already busy setting one up."why not set the camp all around this clearing?" i asked.a raptor came into view."dont shoot,hes tame." i said quickly.a loud,under-water like yell followed from the west.i went to scout and found,of course,an ocean.nearby were some light collored herbivore dinos and some blueish eggs,along with about five purple eggs.(blue were plesoisaurus or somthing..the others...well...)i went and gathered them up and scanned the dinos.i saw they werent much of an enemy.i walked back with the eggs and started scanning them,while my squad ate(i dont sleep or eat much) and the others talked.

As the last dinosaur fell Viper felt sadness. He lowered his pistols and jumped from the tree. Tiscalli a word. Viper walked into the cover of the cloak and Tiscalli followed. Viper pressed a button and the cloak grew thicker. No one could go in and no sound could travel out. They had complete privacy.
"What is it?"
Viper started pacing
"I don't like these guy's' attitudes towards these things. You see that clone? he has one as a pet! No...it's not right.... I refuse to believe these things can become tame!"
"Viper calm down"
"CALM! These clones come here.....this species will be extinct before long!"
"I find it un-usual that a bounty hunter cares about-"
Viper held up a hand. He had noticed something very odd.
"there was....no blood"
"what?"
Viper walked out of the cloak. And over to one of the massive beasts. Be withdrew a knife from his pocket and sliced open the things leg. He stepped back
"It's not real.....it's a machine....but why?"
He turned to Tiscalli who looked stunned and then to the clones who looked like they couldnt care less. Viper turned and fired. He hit one of the clones chest and he fell back. The others seemed to be stunned by this act. Viper shot another one and he fell too.
"TISCALLI! BACK IN THE CLOAK!"
Viper rolled back into the cloak. Viper ran into his ship and Tiscalli followed. The hatch closed and Viper took off...

"WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!?!fixer,boss!help sev and scorch!everyone else...." i yelled,grabbing my RPG."LOCK N LOAD!SHOOT THAT THING DOWN!" i shot rocket after rocket at the thing.i finally got a good hit on the engines and it lowered a bit to a nearby cliff,and me and omega jumped onto the outside of the ship and found some handles to hold onto.i deployed my grappling hook to the ship,and omega did the same."they dont know were aboard!just hang on and as soon as they land well sabotage their ship!" i whispered to him.he nodded.i hung onto the handle for dear life and hoped that if i lost my grip my grappling hook wouldnt snap."oh wait i can use the force." i said,hiting myself in the forehead.i magnetized the area where omega was,so he stuck onto it,and for me,i used the force to temporarily melt the metal around my armor,and then harden again.i opened up a candy bar that worker gave me and took a bite,then stored it back in my pocket.

The sensors went wild. Viper glanced at one of the screens
"Whats that mean?" asked Tiscalli
"Sensors...something is hanging onto our ship It helps with missiles and Buzz droids and now it's helped with these clones"
Viper smiled
"So they want to play...lesson one....a bounty hunters ship is never as it seems!"
Viper delpoyed an electro shield. The clones hanging on were about to get a shock literally. They would fry and loose control of their bodily functions for several moments. Viper then set the astro droid on board to make repairs.
"Lesson two: A question class...is there air in space?"
"But we can't!" yelled Tiscalli
"We can just about make it out of the atmosphere then drop back in by that time they would have suffocated"
Viper dived and swerved just because they were on his ship didn't mean they were going to get it easy...

i realized what they were doing.the metal melted again and i jabbed my saber through the ship,then made a hole large enough to get us in.omega became demagnetized and hopped in to,then i grabbed the ships peice and melted it back together in the place where it belonged.i heard a loud electric shock outside."come on,before they find us again...and careful..we dont want to be caught." i whispered.i looked up and silently removed a vent shaft,then grappled up in it."now to deactivate engines,weapons and everything else.." i whispered to myself.

Viper glanced at the screens
"We've got a breach"
"What?"
"Someones got through our hull...damn their onboard"
Viper looked around hopelessly.
"Close all shafts and doors to the engine...I don't want anything breaching it....put ray shields and what ever else we've got UP"
Viper thought
"I could land and isk more damage to the ship....or continue and risk more damage to the ship....decisionsdecisions"
Viper decided to land. whilst trying to find a suitable place something came up on the scanner....a buildin. Viper looked it over. He made up his mind
"Tiscalli we're going in"
Viper landed the ship and grabbed his weapons and threw some grenades, knife, pistol and rifle to Tiscalli
"I don't know whats going on here....all I know is your the only one I trust"
"Thanks...I trust you too....Im not sure about those clones....they seem very....aggresive....shoot now ask questions later"
"true...but thats what Jango was like-" Viper stopped
"Come on lets go"
Viper lowered the ramp. And as an extra procaution imobalised the ship. It would not fly. No matter what they did to it. It would not budge. As he exited he saw a vent shaft. He looked at Tiscalli. He got a sensor and placed it by the ramp and fiddled with his sensor. Now he's know when exited
"Lets go shopping" He said as he turned and led the way into the lab

i slashed my way through door after door in the shafts,occassionally just wanting to tell omega to jump off the ship then plant a charge and jump off to.i finally got to the weapons system,and planted some charges around them,then ran back into the shafts and detonated it."there goes their weapons.......next up:security" i thought,then started slashing,and i came over the ramp and saw the two down in there,exiting.i just wanted to take a spas 12 i found and aim at those traitors heads.but instead i simply tossed two tracking devices down onto them,their size so small that you couldnt feel it if you shot it at yourself.i continued onto te security station and dropped a thermal,a loud 'BOOM!' following."two down,four to go" i thought,then continued on through the shafts,slicing every single last door blocking me i came to.

Darrick watched the ship take off as he hid in the bushes again after the men looked away from him. "Bet they think they can mess with me. ha! Now i have to track where that ship went and make sure they don't find the ...Lab!!!!!. Sh*t they're in it now. Hopefully they don't find my lab room."

((My guy can be one of the men that created the Mechanized Dinosaurs.....so thats what i'm talking about up there ^))

As they entered the building they heard a explosion. Tiscalli Turned.
"Dosn't it bother you they are blowing apart your ship?"
"Trust me my ship is tougher than it looks"
"But-"
"Trust me if it was in any danger I would not have left it"
Tiscalli nodded. They continued to walk around. The lab had nothing of real interest. Tiscalli tried to hack into the computer system but the computer fizzled and died. They entered a main chamber where eggs and pods were. The pods contained dinosaurs. The eggs had hatched and tiny foot prints had been left.
"What is this place? Is this were they make dinosaurs"
"No...this is were they play god"
Viper looked around more closly. He picked up a data pad and read:

Entry 67:

The genetically inhanced dinosaurs are proving more trouble than we thought. They are stronger and faster. They seem to like hanging around the compound gates for some reason. This has caused many workers to have been injured and some even killed. We are starting to realise this testing is not the way to go aboug it. Some people suggested making mechanical dinosaurs. The nerve!

Entry: 68

It appears we are now starting to make a new dino. It's called Gigantosaurus a 19ft monster! This will take all our skills.

Entry: 69

We've gone too far. As soon as those monsters came online they attacked the building. And the raptors we've previouslt made had attacked too

Entry: 70

We have barred the gates and sent for an evac. But I have no idea if it's coming

Entry: 71

We're now trapped in the main lab. We can not escape. The doors can no longer hold. They are coming.....

It ended there....

Bac Rueben finally found the planet Earth when his ship was near empty on fuel. He landed 2.3 kilometers away from a building he had spotted on his radar. After landing, he and his crew of 15 men started building camp.

Viper dropped the pad and gripped his pistols
"Do you think they are still near?" Asked Tiscalli
"I don't know but I don't wanna stick around to find out"
"But we need the parts for your ship"
"We'll get them and get out of here"
Viper turned and froze. At the top of the stairs was a Raptor. He was starring them in the face. Viper knew the only reason they wern't dead was because they had taken it by surprise but it was getting over it. He bared his teeth.
"run.." said Viper
"but-"
"RUN!" Yelled Viper as he jetted up to the raptor and tsruck it round the face with his wrist baldes. Tiscalli turned around but was faced with a raptor he grabbed his rifle but it had jammed.
"Crap" He said whilst fiddling with it. He dropped it and took out an Electro staff
"COME ON!" he yelled. He raised the staff and struck the dino around the face. It let out a loud shreak and ran. The other Raptor had met it's death at the end of Vipers poison dart but not before he had managed to get Viper with his long claw. Viper's armour was tough so it hadn't done too much damage and Viper would never let on how much it really hurt.
"Why didn't you use your pistols?" asked Tiscalli
"The same reason you didn't use your Rifle. For some reason they are jammed and I'm sure it this room....I don't know how or why but it wont let us use rifles. And It couldn't have been the clones becasue our weapons were right with us and I used the m as I got out the ship" Viper sighed
"Lets go before more raptors show up"

Viper dropped the pad and gripped his pistols
"Do you think they are still near?" Asked Tiscalli
"I don't know but I don't wanna stick around to find out"
"But we need the parts for your ship"
"We'll get them and get out of here"
Viper turned and froze. At the top of the stairs was a Raptor. He was starring them in the face. Viper knew the only reason they wern't dead was because they had taken it by surprise but it was getting over it. He bared his teeth.
"run.." said Viper
"but-"
"RUN!" Yelled Viper as he jetted up to the raptor and tsruck it round the face with his wrist baldes. Tiscalli turned around but was faced with a raptor he grabbed his rifle but it had jammed.
"Crap" He said whilst fiddling with it. He dropped it and took out an Electro staff
"COME ON!" he yelled. He raised the staff and struck the dino around the face. It let out a loud shreak and ran. The other Raptor had met it's death at the end of Vipers poison dart but not before he had managed to get Viper with his long claw. Viper's armour was tough so it hadn't done too much damage and Viper would never let on how much it really hurt.
"Why didn't you use your pistols?" asked Tiscalli
"The same reason you didn't use your Rifle. For some reason they are jammed and I'm sure it this room....I don't know how or why but it wont let us use rifles. And It couldn't have been the clones becasue our weapons were right with us and I used them as I got out the ship" Viper sighed and took the dart out of the raptor. He didn't want anyone to know what equipment he used
"Lets go before more raptors show up"

i dropped the final grenade and the cockpit went to shreds.jsut to make sure it wouldnt lift off,i set a couple detpacks around the primary areas of the ship.i ran out and ducked behind some bushes with omega.i pulled the trigger and the ship nearly blew up,but to make sure,i dropped a sheilded thermal in the ships power core on my way out.but then the timer went off and it detonated,and the ship blew up."well...there goes our way of getting back to our camp.lets find those traitors!" i said to omega and ran inside.i took a differant path,the path that seemed less taken,and ended up in a very large lab.there was only one thing about it that was wrong.
it was full of bodies.
i ran forward and tried to find any survivor at all,but couldnt.i looked at a screen and found it was sliced by a raptor claw.i got it back up working but found there was again somthing wrong.the screen just displayed osmone,and i had to enter a password.every single last password i tried ended up in the screen mocking me saying,"hahaha,you didnt say the magic word!" over and over.i finally shut it off,and walked up to another door,which was sealed and sealed TIGHT.but i just opened it up by hitting the console once.the door opened and a dead scientist fell forward into my arms.i dropped him,then continued on.this time,there were dead workers AND raptors.i found one with its skin ripped off,and it was mechanical.i jabbed my wrist-blade into all the others,and found the others were real.and i had to clean off my wristblade.again.i walked forward in the blueish room and found another door,this time it had a window.i was about to open it when somone in grey with a strange hat fell on the door,pounding on the glass."PLEASE!OPEN UP!!THERE ISNT MUCH OXYGEN LEFT IN HERE!!ALL THE OTHERS ARE DEAD!PLEASE OPEN THE DOOR!" the survivor cried,then fell to the floor with a type of sigh.i bashed in the doors window and found the guys pulse racing a bit,but he was alive.i looked through my backpack and found a rebreather and put it on the man,and he started to regain consiousness.he opened his eyes and took off the rebreather."ya ya i know.im from anothet galaxy with advanced technology from 'starwars' i know the drill.dont even start talking about it." i said.he blinked,then got up."my names...eh....i dont even know anymore...ive been trapped in there so long..." he said."how long?" i asked."maybe...maybe about five months." was his response."in rodian time,hoth time WHAT?!" i asked."Eh...er....galactic standard?" "wow.come on,let get you armed." i tossed him a spas 12 from the wall.he loaded the shotgun and got ready to fight anything."ok,how do i kill the mech dinos?" i asked him."that panel,right over there.it controls them.smash the panel or just hack the codes and-" he was cutoff."done hacking." i said fastly,then deactivated the dinos and hit self destruct.the map showed alot of mechs going down,but there was still over a million real dinos."well" i said."lock and load!were going after some traitors and with time these dinos can become tame!i already got a pet raptor!were gonna need the largest amount of tame dinos we can get!raptors,ceolophysis',herrasauras',the toughest carnivores we can find!we can corner them,becoue they only have dual pistols,a rifle and a magnastaff an possibly a few grenades!find a way to jam their weapons or just make them waste the ammo,we got em where we want em!now lets move out!rescue any survivors in this facility,capture any carnivores on this island!"

Farrick started running back to the lab whe he heard an explosion go off somewhere near the lab. He decided to check what the explosion was from. Once he got there he examined the untouched areas off the ship and noticed it was the ship from earlier. As he stepped out from the bushes he was caught by the two men who owned it(forgot your names jediofdoom). They stopped and looked at the half-way destroyed ship and back at Darrick.

As Viper left the main building with Tiscalli they came across the ruins of Viper's ship.
"See I told you"
"Yeah and what did I Tell you?"
Viper pushed a button on his wrist and the ship started humming.
"Self repairs and the little astro droid workiking too....it will be ready in a few moments"
Tiscalli looked stunned
"A bounty hunters ship is never as it seems" said Viper simply
They turned and saw a man. Viper raised a pistol.
"Stop. Who are you?"
Tiscalli raised his rifle and glanced at Viper
Viper looked at Tiscalli then back at the man
"Who are you?" he repeated

"Um the man from earlier!, and I see you have discovered my lab. What did you discover while in there, if i don't mind asking?" as he watched the guns pointed at him.

Viper looked at Tiscalli
"If it's your lab you should know" Viper said
"What's with the mechanical dinosaurs? What happened to the real ones?"
Viper glanced back at his ship it was repaired He grabbed the man and threw him into the ship. Viper wanted to get away from the lab. He didn't want the clones to find them. He took off and circled the planet. He landed in a barren wasteland. He put the cloak on and swiveled to face the man.
"What's your name and why have you created these things?"

i wasnt stupid.i placed a tracking device on the ship,and it showed it going to a barren wasteland.i zoomed in once,entering a veiw of alot of stars,then on the planet,then past the gravity,then onto a barren wasteland.(like the veiw from starwars battlefront 1) i had noticed a facility on it.i zoomed in and analized it.it showed......area 72?i decided to scan for the area name,and it showed 'egypt'.good news was we had finished gathering dinos.bad news was alot of vehicles were moving fastly across the desert.it looked like space ships,only had four wheels,no roof and a machinegun in the back(military jeep).others were tanks..but not as advanced.even if they were traitors,i had to help.i hacked the ships com device with my armband.a pure black helmat of a clone commando appeared on the screen at the cockpit."you better get back here fast!there are over a hundred vehicles coming your way,and an analysis shows that the tanks have missles that are more powerful then any ADVANCED thermal!!!THEY WILL BLOW YOU TO SMITHERENES!ive been monitering some broadcasts of 'movies' and 'tv shows' and they think we dont exist!theyll think your 'aliens'!the planets government WILL place you in custody and detain your ship!GET OUT OF THERE!" i yelled into the com."get out fast if you want to live...get out fast if you want to get back to the galaxy..if..if......." i stopped talking and thought for a second of what i was about to say.i couldnt trust anybody,after the clones...the stormtroopers....my brothers turned on me.i didnt show emotion at all,and i wouldnt.i hoped somthing could distract me so i could stop talking,and just as if it got through to the master of fate,an earth 'copter' landed and dropped off some dino hunters,as the scanner said."DAMN!SHOOT EM!" was the last thing i said into the com,then for a second it switched to a side camera and showed alot of blastershots and bullets and explosions in the background,right before a bullet slowed and lightly hit the button to turn off the armband.

(by the way,my characters just like jediofdooms.my characters miserable and doesnt trust anyone,especially after the clones turned.and the warnings before the hunter ambush were his family[i dont know if he has family left.or atleast my character doesnt] and..you figure the last out.and if you figure it out,i meant not me.)

"My name is Darrick Dominia. And i'm not ready to tell you about my secrets, since i'm the only one to know about them yet." he said hoping they don't get mad and shoot him. "Also, the real Dinosaurs weren't my creation. That's all I'm going to say."

Viper looked at Tiscalli.
"O...k. Thats good enough I suppose..."
Viper glanced around
"So what can you tell us about this planet called earth?"
Viper knelt down and touched the sand. He stood up and looked around. To the west he could see some sought of transport with a mounted gun on the back. Viper looked at it and glanced towards Darrick hoping for some explanation of this transport. None came. He glanced to the west and saw in the diastance three massive shapes.
"Pyramids" Tiscalli said. Viper nodded.
"I want to take a look" He said absently mindedly. He walked back on board his ship and beckoned to Tiscalli. Tiscalli pointed his rifle at Darrick and motioned him into the ship. It took off and made it's way to the pyramid....

"What are you guys talking about? You don't know anything about Earth?" he said as he walked onto the ship as a prisoner.(which is fine by me, lol, Darrick doesn't like anybody that finds his lab unless he told them about it.)

"Nothing as sutch" Viper said sitting down
"I know it's called the "Blue Planet" though"
"Dosn't look too blue" said Tiscalli looking out of the window
"It's called that because 70% of it's surface is ocean"
"I see...." Tiscalli didn't sound interested
Viper took off and made his way to the pyramid. He dropped down a few feet away from it. The cloak was already on. Viper set up some auto turrets and locked the ship up. He fiddled with it so it would't go anywhere. He left the cover of the cloak and turned to the pyramids and looked for an entrance....

As Darrick followed the two men, he noticed they were looking for the entrance and he tapped Tiscalli's shoulder and pointed at a boulder sitting next to the pyramid.

Tiscalli glanced at the rock
"Hey Viper" he nodded at the rock
Viper went over to it and tapped it
"hmmm" Viper got out a time bomb and set it and backed away. The bomb blew the rock apart and revealed a small hole. Viper glanced at Tiscalli and started walking down the dark passage....

(im back!sorry ive been gone so long)

i looked around at the soldiers corpses scattered around and the rubbel of the copter."well weve made quite a mess havent we?" i asked the group.they nodded.the raptor i had as a pet was just finishing eating a soldier.my squad finished gathering supplies and we headed back to camp,and i was still thinking of the group who left the island.i forgot the eggs in my backpack and started analyzing them again.i decided to keep them in a small,heated footlocker until we got home."i wonder when those guys will get back..whatever,anyway were going to set up a trap for them,guessing they come back here.make them unnoticable,even to me.not those useless leaf traps." i said.they started working and i continued analyzing the eggs.

Then, there is a high pitched screech, like a balloon deflating in that weird squeaky way that people seem to be able to make it do, and the squad looks up. Suddenly, they see A Giant three headed pteradactyl of doom swoop in and poop all over the squad, burning their eye-sockets with it's acidic reptile feces. Then, the Keeper of the Dinosaurs, the mighty Bim Blaster Bob:cowdance, Jumps off. "Hand over the eggs, insignificant maggot!" he said, while igniting his doomsday sticks: His dual double bladed lightsabers!!!!! and then, he Pulls out a throwing star and brandishes it menacingly.....

.....someone shoot this guy. dude your not funny your just really really imature

ya,what he said.thats not even an actual rp post,so lets just disregard that and his existance.ever.and bob,never post in an rp thread again if thats somthing you post.

Oh c'mon, that one was funny.

no it wasnt,it was stupid and immature.this is aiming toward a jurassic park-themed rpg,not a comedy game with stupid jokes.were disregarding that you ever posted that and dont post here again bob.go make your own "comedy" thread and leave us to rping.also,your quite annoying becouse im trying to play gmod here!(not in this thread)oh and by the way,it cant burn my squads eyes becouse WERE ALL WEARING HELMATS!the only one who isnt wearing a helmat is a droid!

umm... It's spelled Helmet, and helmets don't cover eyes. just thought i'd point that out.

i dont care,and helmets do cover eyes you friggin moron!what,you think this is a normal rpg thats not in starwars?!?!HELMATS COVER YOUR ENTIRE FACE FFS!

Not all of them, look at the rebel soldiers, the only ones who have anything covering their eyes are the pilots, sure, the imps have em, but the rebels don't.