Originally posted by LukeKatarn
You said he was dead, not you thought that he was dead. Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only! :o
Malachi felt a creeping on his neck, and turned to see a hand. With a saber. He let out a cry, and unleashed a devestating lightning blast, magnetising the hand and rendering it useless. The saber also temporarily shorted out, as well as his own. "This can't be good."
I got up,bleeding,and struk Revan with amazing force,rendering him useless,I also spat on him and put the ship down in a dive and jumped out of it.I turned and watched the fireworks.
Originally posted by Redwing
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...although this RP is already pretty insane XD))
((Hope that is a joke. :D))
Zoric ran with Malachi but tripped when they reached the place where Htel was. Zoric got up and saw Malachi's and Htel's sabers short out. Zoric ran in and tossed Malachi one of his sabers. "Lets do this" said Zoric.
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!
((I forgot what are you Darth? A sith or jedi or neutral?))
I stand up. The ship was standing on the earth and this sith wasn't here any more. I get out and saw the sith fighting against another jedi. I must help him. With one arm!
Originally posted by DarthTDe
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!
Well that kinda very god modeing.
Originally posted by Evil Dark Jedi
((I forgot what are you Darth? A sith or jedi or neutral?))
I'm a sith.Sorry Jaden Malip:D
((How about you just join in the battle, instead of destroying everyone? :D )
Originally posted by DarthTDe
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!
((NO GODMODING. :p
No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))
Originally posted by Redwing
((NO GODMODING. :p
No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))
((True but the very beginning had a story and now it is just a huge fight. :D Oh and Darth Htel is a cyborg and very tough and Malachi is very tough aswell. So is my char is you said. They are all pretty strong.))
((Yeah and Htel is a Sith, WHY THE CRAP WERE YOU ATTACKING ME!? And not only is Htel a cyborg, he's a Cyborg combined with Durges DNA. he is also a cheif master of the sith but was though to die, but that wasn't Htel, that was Therk, after supposedly dieing he switched around his name and last name and put them backwards and got Htel Kreht. So let's continue, and BTW even if one of my sabers burns out I still have three more double bladed sabers:p )) "Get out of here. This is no place for you." i said to whatever Darth's char is (forgot the name). "And to you Malachi, what's up with the lightning? And I have THREE MORE DOUBLE BLADED SABERS!" ((And to Revan Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only! You can't be sure he's dead because he isn't dead. And you didn't say you were sure he was dead you said he WAS dead. Yo ushould edit it to you think he's dead because you can't be sure he's dead when he isn't.))
"You want to know about the lightning?" Malachi said. He sensed a padawan coming to help, so he turned around and filled the learners body with electricity. "I am no longer a Jedi. But neither am I Sith. I'll use the force how I want to use the force. However, I'll team up with this Jedi. To destroy you."
"And why do you hate me? You join with Jedi when you don't when you are nuetural, HA! You make me laugh," 3 remaining sabers go to full strength and I jump in the air and attack.
"You took the strike against my former self, and I hold grudges." Malachi charged up his sabers and blocked the incoming attacks before jumping backwards onto a ledge. "Being neutral lets my mind stay clear. Unlike the Sith or Jedi, I work things out for myself, decide what to do. Not live in an silent, ongoing war.
Zoric watched the fight. "Why Jaden? You are a true Jedi. A true Jedi" said Zoric as he jumped up behind Htel and used his saber to stab right into the back of Htel...
The saber hit metal in a clank, but in broke through and I fell down. Head first. "You jedi will pay, and Malachi I only fought you former self because your former self was a Jedi. So you have no reason to hold grudges, it was your own fault."
"I was Jedi, but I was forced into it. My parents were relieved to be rid of me when I was discovered. I was raised fully at the temple, my home. Even the masters said I had anger problems but my master saw through that. The Force potential. Ignored the brash feelings of revenge and saw into my mind.
The Jedi, however, held me back. Weakening me. I have the right to be angry. To strike back and weaken them. But not yet. The Sith must first die. Then, the Jedi. Zoric, join me."
"You're a fool. A complete fool." My sensors go down and my eyes shut. i was alive, but bareley. Only the Sith technicians could save me, and they'd need to get a much stronger metal.
Malachi ran back to battle, empowered with the force and knowing that the ultra-cyborg would be back. And before then the Sith had to be destroyed before he could leave. Alone.
Two Sith came running towards him and soon dropped to the floor as there necks got sliced. He turned, and saw a Sith Lord gripping a Jedi and laughing maliciously only paying attention to his actions. His arm was gone, then the other arm and both legs. The Lord was a helpless torso. The Padawan tried to thank Malachi, but was knocked out as the boot of the renegade connected with his jaw. Malachi couldn't help but smile as he slaughtered a group of cowering Sith Apprentices.
Zoric followed Malachi and saw him slaughtering sith. 'I will not help you" said Zoric as he jumped at Malachi. Zoric ignited his saber and cut Malachi's saber arm off..
"You b*****d!" Malachi lifted Zoric into the air with the Force and threw him across the ice. He started healing himself, but the arm would never grow back. He called his sabers too him and ran to where the Jedi had landed single man snubfighters. He found an A-wing in good condition, it had had several upgrades in the shields. Malachi looked back, his anger flaring. "I will get my revenge." He flew to Coruscant, and found hospital, specialising in bionics. His saber ignited and was less than an inch away from the main doctor. "Give me a new arm."
"Damn Malachi is nuetral now" said Zoric. He went to the hanger and got a ship. He then flew it to Courascant(sp?). Zoric knew he was there cause he could feel his presence...
((So, where exactly did the arm get cut off?))
((From the shoulder down.))
The doctors knocked out Malachi with anesthetic, and started operating. The operation was barely finished, and the bio-arm had been attatched when Malachi's eyes snapped open. He sat up and said, "He's coming. The Force does not lie." Malachi started to leave the building, when the doctor grabbed his shoulder. "It's not finished! It needs the skin coverings!" Malachi's answer was a punch in the nose to the man, who dropped to the floor, face covered in blood. Malachi looked at the arm. The same build of his similar arm, but silver. There were blood stains on the fingers where he had hit the man, but they would leave. He pushed the arm forwards, and a blast of the force came out of it, not as strong as before. That would be impossible, the arm was gone. The cowering doctor flew against the opposite wall. "Keep the change" Malachi said to the man as he left the hospital.
Most of the Jedi had gone, the Sith techs came and started working on me. They knew they had to get a stronger alloy, I fell apwart to easily. They took me in a ship and set me on a table, where I would remain until the yfound the metal.
No Malachi, you can't do this! You used to be my friend remember? You can't slaughter people ruthlessly, even if they are sith!
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength
Originally posted by Mak Corran
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength
:S You do know I'm on Coruscant, right?
Originally posted by Mak Corran
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength
((Don't double post...use the edit button ;)))
(Yeah Mak flew away from the battle cause he was injured and needed to speak with the council too)
((Ah, that makes sense :p))
Malachi stopped infront of Mak, "What are you doing here. I have no quarrel with you."
((Where are we,and what's going on!?!?I was knocked out for a long time!!!))
Originally posted by LukeKatarn
((Yeah and Htel is a Sith, WHY THE CRAP WERE YOU ATTACKING ME!? And not only is Htel a cyborg, he's a Cyborg combined with Durges DNA. he is also a cheif master of the sith but was though to die, but that wasn't Htel, that was Therk, after supposedly dieing he switched around his name and last name and put them backwards and got Htel Kreht. So let's continue, and BTW even if one of my sabers burns out I still have three more double bladed sabers:p )) "Get out of here. This is no place for you." i said to whatever Darth's char is (forgot the name). "And to you Malachi, what's up with the lightning? And I have THREE MORE DOUBLE BLADED SABERS!" ((And to Revan You can't be sure he's dead because he isn't dead. And you didn't say you were sure he was dead you said he WAS dead. Yo ushould edit it to you think he's dead because you can't be sure he's dead when he isn't.)) (( Come on! Is it the world's destiny?;) ))
My arm hurts me. I schould better get a new arm, I thought. But where?
I let this sith running his way. I couldn't do anything against him with this pain.
I walked carefully towards a jedi star destroyer standing on the start place. I was lucky cause he wasn't captured by some sith. Then I got straightly to the medic station, hoping that someone could helps me!
((Revan,you might wanta delete those))
I suddenly was forced up by a very sudden explosion.I started running toward the rumble to find bodies everywhere."OH,CRAP!!!
" I yelled...they were the sith drop-fleet ship."I can't ssist the sith anymore" I said *neutrality* ((I am now a rogue Jedi,I've been
planning this))
((I deleted it :) ))
I was scared when I saw this sith who had cut off my arm running with some other jedis. I wanted to warn them but I was in the ship and they were outside.
I was surprised when he begans to talk with them, he must be a jedi suddenly!
I saw the Jedi that i cut the arm off of,I walked to him and gave him his arm,"you might want this"I threw it at him,"the medical facility is over there"I pointed North."bye!"I yelled as I ran off to the opposte direction and killed some sith and Jedi on my way.
((sorry, you killed jedi?))
This guy was a funny one! My arm! My great arm, and he threw it!
I spawn camp by the check point in a speeder waiting for any Jedi or Sith that might be around.
((darkoak,this isn't Battlefront:D ))
I ran forward,watching Jedi cut down thousands of Sith.Then I ran into a Jedi they called Zoric,"I have seen you Jedi battle,and I wish to join your noble cause.will you except me?"
After I got my arm repaired, I leaved the star ship where the medic center was.
Then I saw a guy waiting in a speeder. I walked towards him!
Coruscant was quiet. Malachi had ignored the call of the Force saying that the Jedi were coming for him. He was here. They were elsewhere. And here was in ruins. Everybody, either trying to helpful, happy, or trying to keep their feeble lifestyle going with mountains of credits. This place needed a new ruler, he thought to himself.
He quickly found out the mob that was controlling this part. Nobody knew their real names, but everybody knew that they were organised crime. Nothing happened without their knowledge. They knew he would be here. Malachi suddenly got a rush of adrenilin and turned round, igniting his sabers and rolled out of the way of a sniper shot. An assassin.
"I dont know" said Zoric as he killed a sith with his saber. "Can you be trusted?"
"Good. Now help the jedi defeat the sith" said Zoric as he killed a sith. Zoric then jumped over a sith and stabbed the soth in the back...
"I got it!"I yelled as I jumped,killing 2 Sith,"It feels good,now I can finally LEGALLY kill my master"I said.I ran on through the battlefield,and met my old master,"Zhor!Zhor..." "What?"he asked."DIE!!"I said as I swung my lightsaber,delivering a killing diagonal blow,"AAAAARGH!!!"he yelled.
Zoric watched as the former sith attacked all the sith. He is using the side of jedi kill the sith thought Zoric to himself. Zoric went ff to kill another sith...